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Ok this isn't my best alteration but I made a Peter Pan quickly, I might do a better version soon, depends if you guys like this one or not though.. If I do, do another one, it will probably be an animation with Peter and Captain Hook having a duel. Constructive Criticism is appreciated and taken into account, I don't just brush your comments to the side! So, rate?
:o That's really cool Naomi :)
Wow Ashley, you're quick! lol.
cutee!
but you should make the face look younger
as peter pan is a kid forever&ever&everr!
other then that its good &the clothes look awesome.
8/10
xx
Thanks laura, I tried to make the face look young by giving him a blush and characterised features.
maybe you could add like really small eyelashes or something like that?
im not that sure really :p
x
It's really good ^^ I agree with Laura though... It could be a bit more Childish :P
It looks like a Teenager with Achnie. Sorry for saying that >_< But it's kinda... the truth >_<
Looks cool 8/10
I think the shading is overdone on his green top though.
Still, nice work :D
Haha, :P Don't apologise for being honest, I appreciate your honesty!Quote:
Originally Posted by Kiba.
*** thats wierd , um ill give it a midrateing not good not bad
Its actually quite good already, 9/10 +rep
I'm going to have to say I'm not a huge fan. I know how hard it is to do work on clothes and the suchlike, and I like the idea here, but I think it could have been pulled of somewhat better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Blissa
For example, the sense of perspective appears warped, where his feet are (unless I've misjudged this completely!) pointing slightly downwards compared to the rest of his body, and his hat appears to be hanging off the back of his head!
Saying that, however, the shading on this piece is phenomenal, which makes it noticeably better. For that, +Rep :)
Thanks for the +Rep and comments Reviewdude and Doomsboy, I'm going to make a better, more detailed version tomorrow I think, I see what you're saying completely Reviewdude, plus, the alteration did only take the best part of 5 minutes.
Wow, for 5 minutes, that's not too shabby! :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Blissa
And you're completely welcome :)
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looks great, although it looks a bit wierd.
But anyway well done 9/10
Little bit dodgy, +rep anyway
Id say hes more of a robin hood :D
Very good alt tho!!!