I need improvements on this layout I made earlier and if anyone is interested in purchasing it I could also make a flash version.
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/6...usinessnt7.png
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I need improvements on this layout I made earlier and if anyone is interested in purchasing it I could also make a flash version.
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/6...usinessnt7.png
:ooo that is gd. +REP
For once your design looks proffestioanl +rep George ;)
Thankyou, just a note everything on their is designed 100% by me including the sample logos and 3D image which means if you purchased you would have full rights to them. I would also consider creating you some music for the background.
Wow, that very nice :]
Thankyou ^^Quote:
Originally Posted by Jaffa Cakes!
Am I the only one that thinks this design is completely rubbish and not professional at all?
abit of constructive criticism would be nice :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
ontopic: Its quite nice, Like the colours. +repped
Why are you never constructive?Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
I'm telling you its bad. Thats constructive for 'start again'.
Let's see you do better pls.Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
Haha. You make me laugh.Quote:
Originally Posted by L?KE
www.developlive.com/work/design
Enjoy :)
Then its not constructive atall, saying 'start again isnt helping me atall improve THIS layout. Please do not post again as I want people to post who will actually help me improve it.Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
Ok. Since everyone here dislikes me have some constructive critisicm.
- The navigation. The font doesn't work. Try using more professional fonts on this type of design.
- The content area IMO should be above the middle bit as thats whats most important.
- The fonts used aren't nice, possibly cause they're on sharp etc?
I just personally think this design lacks the professional edge. Business/professional layouts are clean, white and simple to use. This is dark, clean to an extent, but not accessible.
I have to agree with richard. This isn't professional.
But as I'll get flamed unless I'm constructive I'll say this:
Nice parts:
The choice in colours could be worse.
The idea behind the layout is decent.
Bad parts:
The text in the right hand section.. the stroke on it (The thick white) is terrible.
The text on a whole doesn't look right.
The gradient in the header is much too strong. Have a smaller colour contrast.
The balls look weird.
Advice:
Check out some tutorials: http://pixel2life.com & http://www.good-tutorials.com
Have a look at some sites for inspiration: http://webcreme.com & http://www.flickr.com/photos/splat/sets/981332/
Good luck.
It depends what kind of business it is used for, anyway thats only your opinion such as mine is that:Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
http://www.developlive.com/work/desi...nts/index6.jpg
http://www.developlive.com/work/desi...ost/index9.jpg
http://www.developlive.com/work/desi...IVE/index1.jpg
lack professionalism.
And thankyou Josh I will.
And you know these are professionally styled layouts on a basis of what? The developLIVE ones were test layouts based on a certain style, while the Qunex one was for a client who liked it.
How do you know mine is? They are all business layouts the same as mine.Quote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
He never said his were business yet your title clearly says BUSINESS.Quote:
Originally Posted by 06
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KnoxInvestmentsQuote:
Originally Posted by Josh-H
Qunexhost.com
Tell me how these arent business sites? Even if he says he was just testing stuff their purpose is still a buisness site.
LOL :) richard :P +repQuote:
Originally Posted by RichardKnox
I totally agree but in a point of prespective as where i think the links are too bulky im not liking it.