http://www.freewebs.com/habbo-fanzo/Habbofanzo.htm

http://www.freewebs.com/habbo-fanzo/Habbofanzo.htm its not brilliant but i wana advertise it visit job page for a job

mate i'll be working on yor site within the next 2 days ok mate

ok but that is the temp

dont like your site

ok fair enough

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Originally Posted by jamie4k

dont like your site

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Abit harsh mate just because you can do better atleast hes tryed

Danny.

thanks would any 1 like to help

Its not bad for a first attempt at a Html site good luck :)

You need to upload that picture... :)

*rubs eyes* ouch i already needed glasses now i think i need superduperamazinglyzooming in glasses

i done it in frontpage hehe

O well then its pretty poor... because all you have done is made the page redand done some writing "/

i could do it in html y u change ur mind :@ will u help if i do it in html

Constructive criticism:

• Watch your colours - the background is too glaring
• Change the font to a more web friendly one, like verdana
• have more padding between the tables so the writing is not as close

We all have to start somewhere. My advice is listen to what people say without taking it personally (they don't know you personally) and start reading a book on BASIC HTML - you will be surprised how much you learn.

Hope that helps? :)

Heh i think the best book ever is basic html for noobs ;) it rocks