Paradise Sofa [v4 & v4.5]

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20-10-2007, 02:28 PM
jackass

My favourite alt. I think I posted this a while ago, but I havn't been on the forum for a while. So here it is, took me a while, and i'm proud of it really. Please rate out of 10, and don't bother giving C&C, because you will probaly say, make it so the chair won't tip. It won't tip, its based on my swing seat at home, and it does not tip because of the supports, trust me. (:

http://www.iaza.com/work/071021C/sun...21107-iaza.gif

Okay, so I noticed a few ways to improve it, thanks to a few people from the v4 thread. So I have decided to finish after one after this. So the final, and I mean it this time, will be the one after this, so please give as much C&C as possible, all help will be given a +Rep, so please rate out of 10 and give comments etc. And this was only supposed to be a mini project...

Oh yeah, make the C&C as crazy as you want, even like a whole new area, thats bigger and better etc. So its not just one tiny image. Thanks! (:

http://www.iaza.com/work/071023C/sun...40051-iaza.gif

Edited by Yoshimitsui (Super Moerator): Threads merged at users request.
20-10-2007, 02:30 PM
GhostFace-

1. LOL Werent u a mod. u gave me like 4 infractions :(

2. alright 8/10
20-10-2007, 02:32 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by GhostFace-

1. LOL Werent u a mod. u gave me like 4 infractions :(

2. alright 8/10

I have moderated many forums, so I can't remember.

But thanks for your rating. (y)
20-10-2007, 02:32 PM
jesus

o wow i fink it looks gr8, only improvement i can think of is to make like some little plants/grass fings @ bottom so it kinda looks like its comin outta the ground more.. u know wot i mean :)
20-10-2007, 02:32 PM
VPSwow

I like it well done +REP
20-10-2007, 02:32 PM
=gamemaster=

I wouldnt like to sit n it, i would fall off, it needs a frame around the chair!
20-10-2007, 02:35 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by DOWNFALL

o wow i fink it looks gr8, only improvement i can think of is to make like some little plants/grass fings @ bottom so it kinda looks like its comin outta the ground more.. u know wot i mean :)

Yeah, I see what you mean. I don't use habbo ro anything anymore, so I might not update it. But I do enjoy making alts, so theres still a chance. Thanks for your comment. +Rep. (:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cheekykarl

I like it well done +REP

Thanks, returned. (:

Quote:

Originally Posted by =gamemaster=

I wouldnt like to sit n it, i would fall off, it needs a frame around the chair!

...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Biogeneric

It won't tip, its based on my swing seat at home, and it does not tip because of the supports, trust me. (:
20-10-2007, 02:41 PM
=gamemaster=

cant take critisism?
20-10-2007, 02:42 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by =gamemaster=

cant take critisism?

No, i'm stating a fact, that you obviously didn't read.
20-10-2007, 04:25 PM
Loqo

Thats hot!
21-10-2007, 11:59 AM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Loqo

Thats hot!

Thanks! (:
21-10-2007, 12:29 PM

It is in the Elites Section on Habbox.com so I have seen it already :P

Its nice.
21-10-2007, 04:41 PM
Browney

The middle needs to dip a tad more. Nice though. +Rep.
21-10-2007, 06:01 PM
Pix

Not bad ;) Well done
21-10-2007, 06:05 PM
Heatable

It's kinda good put the way its hanging isnt good.

I wouldnt call it a sofa but like a swing sofa.:P

7/10
21-10-2007, 08:59 PM
@xP

Wow, nice 9/10 :)
22-10-2007, 06:31 AM
Shawnstra

I'd say 8/10
22-10-2007, 11:44 AM
Kyle

very nice, +rep when i can :wink_blue
22-10-2007, 01:04 PM
jackass

Thanks all. (:
22-10-2007, 10:15 PM
Ekalb

Biogeneric you Skilled Pixel Editor. (y) why didn't you post this in the other thread? It's still alive. If you don't stop posting new threads everytime you change it slightly it's gonna turn into Siz's apple collection...

Anyways, it looks okay, layering area with the chair being behind the petals of the left tree and I kinda feel that the two main material areas of the chair need more shading. And a shadow on the bottom would also help.
22-10-2007, 10:49 PM
Abzii

I like it :D
22-10-2007, 11:46 PM
Toxic-Times

AMAZING :D
22-10-2007, 11:51 PM
Moh

needs to be a bit more realistic, it wdnt stay up otherwise, wont survive on just 2 strings
23-10-2007, 05:24 AM
Shawnstra

Yep this one is great :) 10/10
23-10-2007, 12:21 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ekalb

Biogeneric you Skilled Pixel Editor. (y) why didn't you post this in the other thread? It's still alive. If you don't stop posting new threads everytime you change it slightly it's gonna turn into Siz's apple collection...

Anyways, it looks okay, layering area with the chair being behind the petals of the left tree and I kinda feel that the two main material areas of the chair need more shading. And a shadow on the bottom would also help.

Nah thats just a joke in my usertitle, between me & Josh, nvm.

But yeah, thanks, i'll keep that in mind. (:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abzii

I like it :D

Thanks. ;D

Quote:

Originally Posted by Toxic-Times

AMAZING :D

Thanks, also. ;D

Quote:

Originally Posted by .:Jack120:.

needs to be a bit more realistic, it wdnt stay up otherwise, wont survive on just 2 strings

I knew someone would say this, again.

Read the other thread. (;

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doomsboy

Yep this one is great :) 10/10

Thankss!! :-D
23-10-2007, 12:29 PM
Browney

But it wouldn't! It wobble and you couldn't sit back on it. You need some strings coming of the arm rests. :D
23-10-2007, 12:30 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diligo

But it wouldn't! It wobble and you couldn't sit back on it. You need some strings coming of the arm rests. :D

No trust me, it wouldn't!

Its based on the one I have in my garden, and its like exactly the same, and it doesn't wobble, it swings, but not in a tipping way or anything.
23-10-2007, 12:31 PM
Nemo

aha, very nice! The only thing i can see to improve is add some shading to the backrest, coz right now it looks quite hard and plain :].

8/10!
23-10-2007, 12:40 PM
mr.parasols

Try adding variety to the trees? All you've done is Ctrl+r one of the trees. As far as I know.. No two trees are the same. And I agree with everything Ekalb suggested. Otherwise good :]
23-10-2007, 12:41 PM
Alkaz

Its alrite, looks like alot of ctrlc+v
23-10-2007, 01:10 PM
Agesilaus

The seat goes alright with the trees, it looks a bit low, though. The plain walls need a bit more shadow and detail to it.

It's not bad though.

7/10
24-10-2007, 12:46 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Agesilaus

The seat goes alright with the trees, it looks a bit low, though. The plain walls need a bit more shadow and detail to it.

It's not bad though.

7/10

I think your looking at the wrong image. (;
24-10-2007, 01:42 PM
Wolk.

why have you not yet noticed you are missing many pixels off the right hand tree top..
24-10-2007, 01:44 PM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wolk.

why have you not yet noticed you are missing many pixels off the right hand tree top..

Great C&C. :rolleyes:
25-10-2007, 08:03 AM
Agesilaus

The second image is a little better, the more shading is good.

There, I commented on both. =]
25-10-2007, 11:54 AM
jackass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Agesilaus

The second image is a little better, the more shading is good.

There, I commented on both. =]

Aha, thanks. (: