My first Alterations! - Click Me!

Alright,
I've recently just used Ms paint as a painting tool, though, I'm not familier with the concept quite yet. I use Gimp & Photoshop before, however, never seemed to be any good at either the two, which led me to Ms paint; a loyal tool, which is hard to gain control off, so if I were to "Be good" at it, that'll probably be impressive considering it's such a hard tool to function (Mainly used to create 'pixel' artwork). Anyways, I've started fooling around a few days with it, then became used to the program. I've always loved habbo, so my first idea was to create some alterations and maybe mix in some of my own furniture/hotels.. ect. So my very first alteration/image from Ms paint is my resterant with a drive through :P:
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5...inishedro0.png
I know it's bad, but it's my first alterations, so please give me some slack ;-) It still needs some work, like the roof is slanted and it needs to be coloured in... though i'm not sure what colours to use :rolleyes:

Well, once I finished that, I was sorta happy with the results, though so many people on this forum are like professionals compaired to me.. I've got a few ideas and worked on something less time cusumming:
Sofa
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2...asinonewe5.png
Bunk Bed
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3...bunkbediv5.png

There only doubles, and only took 20 each minutes to make, though it was pretty hard becouse the detail within the sofa, though the bed was pretty easy.. :) (The top images were also posted on piehotel, which is a retro, however, I don't support them, I just needed opinions...If you think I stole them, you could email me on http://piehotel.we.**/ and Ill email you back stating that I'm the same person, same username as this forum ;) )

So after about a couple days later of practice, I've decided to make something 'Bigger', the idea of a hotel view came to mind:
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1...teldoneco3.png
I'm not yet complete, I still need the background, clouds, people, and some more detail.. I call it Rocky Hotel becouse once I finish it, becouse it's gonna be 'rocky' xD. Any suggestions would help to improve my hotel :)

You can rate it now /10, and if you'd like, you could either (if you liked it alot) [+] or [-] me if you see one thing that I copied from someone. :D

DONE! :eusa_danc

They are sweet for 1st alterations!

I like the sofa and bunk bed! +rep

Wow.
They are nice for your firsts.
All it takes is paitence and it looks like you have it (:

Thanks! And thanks for + Rep, very much apprieciated!

The bunk bed is hilarious.
Great work! :)

Wow, you seem to be a very promising pixel artist! Shame the top roof on the building didn't have isometric lines as that could have been a excellent piece. My favourite is the bunk bed. :D 7/10 for them as a group

+rep

I dont get the first one it looks all wrong tbh soz but the others are great for a first, My first alt was a guitar and it went wrong :P but hey I give you...

8/10 Great for first and +REP

:DThanks, I'm still fixing up the roof of the resterant! I've done a couple more here.. but I guess ill post them all up later once I finished a group. Also how can I upload my avatars/sigs, it says it's a valid file..:S

the restaurant doesn't really look completly isometric but you have potential, well done.

Nice for your first alts, well done. +rep

Thanks! I really apprieciate all the feedback! :D

Nice effort!

They look effective too. :)

Thank you!

Nice! Bunk bed looks kinda weird :P and the hotel thing looks a bit plain and the first no-colour but yeah they're great! :DDDDDDDDDD

gd for ur firsts

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Thanks.. I'm getting really nice comments for it! this is awsome :rolleyes:

Sofa is best. The first one is all out of perspective.

one more post :D

I know, thanks for your comment, I'm recolouring it up and fixing it up right now however. ;)