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Post how i can improve it :D mite do version 2 if u give me ideas!
Very nice but make the grass not tiled and the backboard more realistic :D
Nice, maybe try to make the flags a bit more habboish, the grass not tiled and the backboard if thats a net improve it a bit?
that has got to hurt, i finally feel sorry for W7 :(
excellent, your alts are really improving :)
Its okay, the downside i'd say is that the sky is too dark, and clouds too small.
Otherwise its coming along good :)
thansk i am only makin alts as theres pixel artist job goin
well done good alt
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is there? good luck if you're applying!
Ye sierk told me personally
The sky needs to look more real, with blue and clouds of different sizes, like on hotel views, the grass not tiled and the shadow of you should be a darker shade of the grass, the flags needs to look more habboish, on hotel view, the flags move in the wind, if they were still like the ones in your alt, they'd be down, the line infront of the habbo isnt straight, the arrows look fine, but the green net? is it a net? doesn't look habboy at all, it needs to be more isometric and not just using random lines, and the blood around W7's feet is just a filled in shadow, blood doesn't go in circles, it needs to look more real. i'd give this about 4/10
luv u greco u inspire generations x
you did it again
youre one the best altmakers all time.. my personally fav
Wow thats so awsome :)
well done lolage at the guy who go hit :S
Thanks i made another alt yesterday but it isnt quite finished so ill post tomoz
amazing 10/10
I dont think its good 3/10 change the stuff people have said
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Oh no wait, im Emirates :)
JOKE That Greco Knows
LOL GUTTED FOR PLEKE i love it lol
It's ok.
The targets look a lil strange and make it grass not tiles!
Otherwise 5/10
it shud say JAPSEYE not BULLSEYE :]
This is good, on the one board thats a triangle missing? Is it mean to be like that also.. the background, all the lines arnt the same direction maybe you could improve that :)
But good if your fairly new 8/10
Why is everyone taking the piss out of him :S. No wonder he's not that good even though he's been doing pixel art for 2 years if people just laugh and don't actually give any useful advice.
You need to think iscomtric. Everything on Habbo is iscometric. That is the perspective all items look as in their angle and the view you see them from. That means most traight lines should only go in certain directions.
Then move onto looking at some shading. This will really bring your work to life.
Check out some of the many tutorials on this forum for some useful tips :).
it looks ok but not quite habbo like flags need to be bigger maybe have some color in them
i think the target could do with looking like a blow up target if you get what i mean
the one thing that i think dissapoints it is the clouds my opinian is they look cr*p
but ill give you 8/10 as i like the idea too :)
oh my amazing alt. Greeco ur alts inspire me
On the subject of Greco, where's that website he and Pleke had a while ago which had all their alts on?
And to the people saying this work is bad - you don't know how brilliant Greco's work is!
Maybe do some c&p of petals for grass. And animate it! If you need any help if you wanna animate it, PM me