Quick design..

Just made this in fireworks.
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7...termarkke6.png
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7...termarkke6.png


tell me what you think please :D

Font on Nav squares is crap (sorry), it doesn't blend in.

Change that, and its good :D

|Right now its a |7/10| |

EDIT: Rectangles aren't even, makes it look abit weirder

use a different color or brighter orange keep fade
and use a box'd navigation on the side and you have something
6/10 so far

Looks very old, pukey too :P try and change the colors and give some corners rounding

It's okay.. You could change some things like;
Font, colours.
The boxes look allright, but when you've done 1 box, why not copy and paste it, so everything's even, and you don't have to make new boxes.

anyways, it's looking allright, and it's very basic.

4/10

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Originally Posted by Pazza

Font on Nav squares is crap (sorry), it doesn't blend in.

Change that, and its good :D

|Right now its a |7/10| |

EDIT: Rectangles aren't even, makes it look abit weirder

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Ill fix the rectangles once iv downloaded fireworks 8..

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Originally Posted by LegendOfNoob

use a different color or brighter orange keep fade
and use a box'd navigation on the side and you have something
6/10 so far

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Yeah you're correct, I need to change the colour to make it brighter

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Originally Posted by Reconix

Looks very old, pukey too :P try and change the colors and give some corners rounding

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Yep I agree, looks old fashion, need to bright it up abit.

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Originally Posted by BigMuscle

It's okay.. You could change some things like;
Font, colours.
The boxes look allright, but when you've done 1 box, why not copy and paste it, so everything's even, and you don't have to make new boxes.

anyways, it's looking allright, and it's very basic.

4/10

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Thanks, will upgrade it soon then re-post it.

That's bad, nothing good about it. I can re-design that and make it look good though.

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Originally Posted by cunning

That's bad, nothing good about it. I can re-design that and make it look good though.

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Instead of saying its bad, could you give me some proper constructive criticism, and go ahead :)
not everyone is good at designing :S

post above is correct i cant design crap but i do know correct criticism and personal opinion

Ok, the middle part looks tacky with nothing their, the font at the top and the navigation are big and unnecessary. You can probably leave the middle the same if you make it more attractive to visitors. Like make the boxes round, I think that might help.

Not bad for a quick design :)
Change the banner, maybe add some brushes into there and stuff. And change the nav text :)

fireworks doesn't have brushes ;)