trax machine

this is mostley c&p but here it is
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6243/traxfda7.png
for those who will say i probley riped this image i dident rip it, and any one who acuses me of riping will be reported to a mod

dont like it

too big, too many speakers, ****** up box on the side

2/10

Theres a bit of pixel errors, the machines are bulky and the colours are horrid. Try making better colours and make the machines smaller and thinner. 1/10

Or failing that atleast round off the edges

im working on these now :)

Nice try but try rounding the edges around the corners of the machines.
Good try though - 5/10

How many alts do you make?

Work on ONE alt.

Isnt this the same shape as your doctor who one?
Just recoloured and then C+P the stuff off a traX machine.

First of all, STOP USING THE WHITE LINES. it looks wrong.
The colours are too dark? change them to nicer? looking colours.
Make the shape smoother/rounded corners. Make it thinner.
Make bigger speakers.


Work on this before you move onto something else.

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I really, really hate it, sorry.

It's poor.

I mean yeah... theres not much more detail you can add to the overall shape... but It's too big, it's boring, and it's bland.

Increase the size of the speakers... or better decrease the size of the alt.

Its irregular, but it looks cool.

its good for a first go 4/10