[C] Jack Sparrow

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22-06-2008, 04:00 PM
Con

[C] Jack Sparrow

Ok, I haven't posted in ages because im working on a large alt :)

This is my attempt at Jack Sparrow - I did it in about an hour and a half?
I don't think its amazing but I think its alright for now.

Looking for constructive critisism :)

Jack Sparrow
http://uploadpicz.com/images/MZPIFHA.png
22-06-2008, 04:01 PM
Alexicles.

I think it looks quite good actually. :D

8/10.

;)
22-06-2008, 04:02 PM
Dusty-09

Wow must say thats one of your best alts I've seen ;) its a definite 10/10. Maybe with a little practice you could get your work into elites ;)
22-06-2008, 04:32 PM
Con

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alexicles.

I think it looks quite good actually. :D

8/10.

;)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusty-09

Wow must say thats one of your best alts I've seen ;) its a definite 10/10. Maybe with a little practice you could get your work into elites ;)

fankyouu
22-06-2008, 04:45 PM
Hiro

I'd have to agree that it is one of your better alterations, although it doesn't really appeal to me, I think the head looks out of place (it looks like it's floating in a wave of hair). Also, I don't really like the fact that it's facing forward, for some reason Habbo character alterations look better when in a diagonal stance.
Overall, it is a great alteration. Keep it up! (:
22-06-2008, 04:54 PM
Kyle

Well you basically copied this
http://www.moktekichi.net/images/jacksparrow.gif

its ok, should make it isometric though :)
22-06-2008, 05:02 PM
lPinoy

http://www.moktekichi.net/images/jacksparrow.gif http://uploadpicz.com/images/MZPIFHA.png

It doesnt matter if he copied it as he made it his.

Anyway, i havent seen much from you but thats rly good.
8/10.
22-06-2008, 06:25 PM
Naythi.

Love it. Looks really good =D +rep
22-06-2008, 06:26 PM
reeana

I like it a lot.
But I don't like the face-on-ness. :( If you do it isometrically I might like it A LOT better.
22-06-2008, 06:55 PM
Con

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hiro

I'd have to agree that it is one of your better alterations, although it doesn't really appeal to me, I think the head looks out of place (it looks like it's floating in a wave of hair). Also, I don't really like the fact that it's facing forward, for some reason Habbo character alterations look better when in a diagonal stance.
Overall, it is a great alteration. Keep it up! (:

Thanks :) Yehh i was thinking of diagonal but I dunno why I didn't I think I was planning on making Jack Sparrow in the middle and then having like Elizabeth Swan And Will Turner on either side :) - Both facing diagonal.
And I don't like the hair either it looks funny :p I actually started editing again after I posted so yeh..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fatface

http://www.moktekichi.net/images/jacksparrow.gif http://uploadpicz.com/images/MZPIFHA.png

It doesnt matter if he copied it as he made it his.

Anyway, i havent seen much from you but thats rly good.
8/10.

Yeh i did see that one and got insperation (ew i can't spell today)
That was the alt that gave me the idea :p And looking now it looks kind of like it i spose.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reezarh

I like it a lot.
But I don't like the face-on-ness. :( If you do it isometrically I might like it A LOT better.

Yeh like i said to Hiro :)
22-06-2008, 07:47 PM
Fehm

I like it :) Little bit fuzzy around the edges, but that might just be my eyes!! :)

nice work 9/10
22-06-2008, 08:25 PM
Con

Quote:

Originally Posted by KnownSinner

I like it :) Little bit fuzzy around the edges, but that might just be my eyes!! :)

nice work 9/10

yeh i think it is fuzy around edges,
It happens when i use photoshop to make the white bg transparent
23-06-2008, 07:56 PM
Monkwrestler

I don't like the face or the hat =/ 7/10
23-06-2008, 07:59 PM
myke

Pretty good, the hair's too much though!
23-06-2008, 08:08 PM
Spiffing

Quote:

Originally Posted by iConz..

yeh i think it is fuzy around edges,
It happens when i use photoshop to make the white bg transparent

Uncheck anti alias ;)
23-06-2008, 08:10 PM
Sepron

I like +rep
23-06-2008, 08:34 PM
Con

Quote:

Originally Posted by SyrupyMonkey

Pretty good, the hair's too much though!

Ino, I just redid his head lol and i will be posting my addition - Jack Sparrow + Elizabeth Swan + Will turner :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffing

Uncheck anti alias ;)

*looks for anti-alias* :)
23-06-2008, 09:51 PM
Spiffing

Quote:

Originally Posted by iConz..

Ino, I just redid his head lol and i will be posting my addition - Jack Sparrow + Elizabeth Swan + Will turner :)

*looks for anti-alias* :)

Found it? :P
Up top ^^
23-06-2008, 09:57 PM
Moktekichi

Erm yeah. Looks quite a lot like mine :/
23-06-2008, 10:00 PM
Moktekichi

Definitely looks quite similar to mine o.o
24-06-2008, 10:19 AM
Con

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffing

Found it? :P
Up top ^^

Yeh I found it :p

Thanks!

btw; Closed thread - Look at the thread [C] Pirates Of The Carribean