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OK, before i start on the blue version of the layout. I just want to know how i can improve this layout. I know this is basic, but i think its much more better than the old one. I don't know if this will be the next layout of RayDeeOhh, but i just want some feedback on the layout, and bits on where i can improve.
I +Rep users who give some great or detailed bits on where i can improve.
http://jewbear.net/img/1216990812562.png
It is too bright and it's too simple, it hurts my eyes to look at and it's overall not appealing.
OK, thanks for your feedback. +RepQuote:
Originally Posted by Arshavin
The thing is it's pink. The style isn't todays market. Take a look at this http://sixrevisions.com/web_design/1...gn_inspiratio/
None of the styles featured in any of the webstes featured on that website is 'todays market' either because it has to be unique.Quote:
Originally Posted by Excellent
A good lot of them are, all layouts are unique if they are not ripped.Quote:
Originally Posted by Arshavin
So sir, may I ask why you are directing him to sites with sites on because in which case, his design will not be unique...Quote:
Originally Posted by Excellent
Nah, I love that article but the best one I found isn't on there: www.webcreme.com
Pure inspiration :) That article is nice too.Quote:
Originally Posted by Arshavin
Not nice colours. Stop using habbo related fonts. It'd be better if you hire a designer, who will design a layout for you, while you learn designing.
Sorry, but I don't like (a lot of us don't) it. It looks too similar to a Habbo layout, and well isn't suited to be a radio site layout.
For starters: the Habbo font. Stop using it, delete it form your hard drive. It's too big and it's distorted. It just yells out Habbo to most viewers.
The banner: it needs a lot more detail. Some text and a gradient won't do it. Add some images, some brushes. Also add some effects to the text such as drop shadow, glow, etc. (if you're using Photoshop).
The content: bcreative, don't just use lines to sperate things. Try adding icons (from famfamfam) at the bottom of each post stating the date or something. Maybe add a width-wise gradient to the lines to make them a little more appealing.
Footer: add one. A simple 100% width footer would look good, maybe in a shade of grey/dark grey. Then add a black stroke and an inner glow (white) to emphasize the stroke.
It has a lot of potential, I would make it a little bigger though. Try changing the pink to a blue as well, that may look better. Good luck.
I hired someone to make me an layout for 15 quid.
All coded and everything.
So scrapped this layout.
good planQuote:
Originally Posted by RyanDOT
Points;
Take a look at websites for inspiration.
- Get rid of the font.
- Use more colour.
- Pink is horrid.
- Rubbish gradients.
- Needs fun pictures.
Thanks anyways.Quote:
Originally Posted by TomSpit
But the layout is now scrapped. And i hired someone to make me an layout for 15 quid.