Rite. Its looking nice qua shaping and colours. Althou I can give you some tips to improve it.
First of all try to shade the area on belly more and arms. Try to use not so bright colours cause than an alt will have a complete differant look than when you use darker colours.
http://www.iaza.com/work/080727C/Mar...27440-iaza.gif http://uploadpicz.com/images/HV8HLCT.png
yours ----mine
Can you see how a bit darker colours can give a complete differant look to an alt.
So in the future try to shade your alts more and find good matching colours.
If you ever need help ;) you can always pm me.