Criticise Please

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17-08-2008, 03:54 PM
EtchyFairy

Criticise Please

http://habtopia.co.uk/images/topiacastlev1.png

Just what ive done so far, Wondering what can be improved before i continue?.

thanks.
17-08-2008, 04:26 PM
luce

I think it is looking good atm but maybe pay more attention to detail :)
17-08-2008, 04:52 PM
EtchyFairy

Quote:

Originally Posted by LukeyBaby,

I think it is looking good atm but maybe pay more attention to detail :)

What detail is missing?
17-08-2008, 05:02 PM
EtchyFairy

Ive noticed i put the right cross too far over to the left

Double post sorry.

Edited by Kaotix12 (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not double post, instead edit your previous post.
18-08-2008, 12:20 AM
EtchyFairy

Question...

Is this forum not to get feedback on your alts?

Edited by ,Jess, (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not double post simply to bump your thread.
18-08-2008, 01:08 AM
Hiro

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtchyFairy

Question...

Is this forum not to get feedback on your alts?

Yes, it is, but the graphics section is sometimes quite dead.
I do like the alt, I really can't see what there is to criticise from my perspective, I look forward to seeing the finished result.
18-08-2008, 01:42 AM
BlueTango

I'm not sure why its called Habtopia? It doesnt look like a habbo utopia.
18-08-2008, 08:07 PM
EtchyFairy

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueTango

I'm not sure why its called Habtopia? It doesnt look like a habbo utopia.

Thats my habbo name :P
18-08-2008, 08:39 PM
-tad.

Because paul smells :p

and it looks good maybe make the sides of the door symetrical ? :)
18-08-2008, 10:54 PM
PaintYourTarget

Add detail and texture to the bricks, they look flat and 2D. Try putting shadows underneath bricks to begin with and move on from there.
The monster doesn't look real, it's like it's a plastic model placed in the bloody water. Try making it more fluid, perhaps submerging it's head a bit more to make it more sinister and lurky. Ripples on the water would work well too, borrow those from the Lido or something :p
The shadow is on the wrong side of the Giant Tampon.
I think the grass, water and path all need more detail and textures - look at Cptn.Kewl's work for good examples.

Looks promising.
19-08-2008, 08:50 AM
SugarBabyRach

The main improvement from my point of view would be detial on the grass [:
19-08-2008, 10:28 AM
Cajak

The tree structure is too much light. Try to make it bigger.
19-08-2008, 02:22 PM
EtchyFairy

Quote:

Originally Posted by PaintYourTarget

Add detail and texture to the bricks, they look flat and 2D. Try putting shadows underneath bricks to begin with and move on from there.
The monster doesn't look real, it's like it's a plastic model placed in the bloody water. Try making it more fluid, perhaps submerging it's head a bit more to make it more sinister and lurky. Ripples on the water would work well too, borrow those from the Lido or something :p
The shadow is on the wrong side of the Giant Tampon.
I think the grass, water and path all need more detail and textures - look at Cptn.Kewl's work for good examples.

Looks promising.

Thanks for your input :), i havent really started work on the detail/texture yet just geting the basics done first, but thanks for noticing the shadow on the 'Tampon' lol, Heres a quick shading on the bricks on the right side what do you think??

http://www.habtopia.co.uk/images/topiacastlev2.png

Thanks tadpole for noticing the issues with the door also :eusa_danc

Cajac cant it just be a small tree :(
19-08-2008, 02:31 PM
PaintYourTarget

Yeah, the highlight on the brick is spot on. Add chips and cracks to the occasional brick, using that highlighting method, to make the wall more interesting - just try not to go overboard :P
I would say try and make battlements on the castle and make it's design more ornate, but I'm going too far and I want to see what you can do :)
19-08-2008, 03:00 PM
Cajak

Quote:

Originally Posted by EtchyFairy

Cajac cant it just be a small tree :(

Oh well... in that case... lol :P
19-08-2008, 07:01 PM
RageAgainst

Im assuming your from http://www.habtopia.co.uk/ , am I right?

http://www.habtopia.co.uk/images/

Infact, both WIPs are in there.
20-08-2008, 01:32 PM
EtchyFairy

Quote:

Originally Posted by RageAgainst

Im assuming your from http://www.habtopia.co.uk/ , am I right?

http://www.habtopia.co.uk/images/

Infact, both WIPs are in there.

Yeah :P

Who Agrees the door is too tall and the windows too high?? :S
23-08-2008, 10:33 AM
AndrewByrne

I really like this
But why did you take stuff from the holloween drome? :eusa_whis
02-09-2008, 11:51 AM
Habtopia

Quote:

Originally Posted by AndrewByrne

I really like this
But why did you take stuff from the holloween drome? :eusa_whis

I fail to see what was taken from the halloween drome allthought i started this in 2005 and made it as a smaller header so i dont remember i could only find one pic of the drome, but thanks for the comments anyway :)

https://habbox.com/images/stories..._halloween.gif

http://www.habtopia.co.uk/images/topiacastlev4a.png

Think of making the building more square i dont know why i did the flat area at the front???
06-09-2008, 11:53 AM
Habtopia

WTH?! i dont get what thats all about
06-09-2008, 12:08 PM
ItsDave

Try and undo the sqaured of ages they look horrible, but if you could round them off into a curvy line, it would be better, looks good.
06-09-2008, 12:12 PM
Habtopia

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xzoid

Try and undo the sqaured of ages they look horrible, but if you could round them off into a curvy line, it would be better, looks good.

Thanks dude i was thinking of rounding them off i guess i just left them like that until i got round too it :P.

making the top part is going to be a nightmare though :rolleyes: