Kwik-E-Mart

I started this couple of days ago. Ive had problems with the sign (cant make the kwik and mart. Anyone can do it if they want. Ratings+c&c Please.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...nsBuilding.png

Apologies for screen enlargement.

:o very nice :D 10/10 +rep

wow blocky?

Nice work but there shhould be some colour variations through the glass windows for the stuff inside like..
Colour the furniture in an paste the glass over with changed opacity so it doesnt look all blue.. Gah... Like on Jasmins office alt in elite sectionI feel the walls need more detail and maybe some stuff in the bin.. Maybe some details on the boxes too and the posters on the window is there. shouldnt the boxes have a shadow on the pavement?
Thats all from me.. Ican do anything that good but you said constructive critisizm
Ok thats all from me 9/10 because i feel if you take some of my advice it can be better

I need paint shop or sumt to make the windows thing. Ill do it laterz, ill get joe to do the window thingy. Apologies for the blockynness, i tried to get it as real as possible.

Well if you design the stuff inside the place and give me the glass i can do it
:)

cba yet. IM ill, not supposed to be on comp. Just came on to post that.

what you use to make it?

Paint, why?

Haha thats cool

Humm it's ok. I gather this is for your little JabbaTown thing? It seems to plain, i'd have a go at making the "kwik" and "mart," but I can't be bothered :). Maybe you should add more shading? :s.

nah it aint for jabba town. Just messing about :P im not good enough for jabba. No where near

good
9/10 :)

youve done ok its kool. You could maybe shade it a little bit more and add a bit more detail but its still impressive 8.5/10 :)

It's very nice well done

brilliant! the only thing i can say about it is that the blue bin (i think its a bin) outside has a black outline whilst nothing else has... to me it seems a little, well it diverted my eyes to the bin instead of the whole shop. still amazing work, as always ;) 9/10

*Looks on hit and run game* :o Put a buzz cola machine in front of it, and maybe JUST maybe a duff truk!

Yea a pretty good alt
Could do with more detail everyware and other stuff like people and cars would be decent
8/10 for the mo

Minds me of the real thing :p
9/10 + rep though

i like all your alts really but when it comes to shading .. eh i dont really like it lol

7/10