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hey all, here is my 1st major alt, been working away at it a couple of hours at a time, rearranging things, i know it aint fully finished but i will update it evry now and again adding nwe things to make it better, can u rate what you think of it just now? :)
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http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y26...newversion.png
this has been updated a little, added more shading and a few extra things, still more to come!
It doesnt... look right to me
good attempt, add some shading and fix the fruit trees :)
Quite good, add more cars and add a downstairs part the the multistory. That sign outside looks a bit off though. Good so far 8/10.
thanx for the feedback, i'll try get all that sorted for next week when i get back.
7/10
The cherry tress don't look right.
The petal patchs wshouldn't be there, ithink
loving bird house in tree :D
Kewl, More shading ;)
that me updated the alt now, please give some more feedback and ratings please?
for your first major attempt, its pretty good. There are parts that could use fixing, but its still 7/10
Its pritty good 7/10
done more to the pic, i think it looks better thanx to the feedback from some people, :D however, more ffeedback is welcome, especially from experienced pixel artists, I have done this from scratch using paint so I am still learning new skills etc. :D
Sorry, didn't like it atall :(
0.0000.0000/10
new update on the pic, re evaluate please :)
Its good.... the sign on the side of the building the writing is kinda wonky but well done for putting so much effort into making a major alt. Good luck with finishing it off!
8/10
Looks a little..
Deformed
Lol
aprt frm that KOOl
8/10
new version is up, please give mroe critisism please, :D
I think in that Tree, It just like a easy head :sQuote:
Originally Posted by Azza
The alt is a little easy 6.9
pretty good, you are on teh right track. just keep working on it and I bet it would look great :) 8/10
its good but the sign is squint and it doesn't look quite.....right
Ahaha! Its Ok, I like it, its not bad, i wont insult you, i know how it is, and dude, i think its Nice, looks like u used paint on it, :P 10 for Effort, Its Niceish
i did use paint, hehe, thats all i got to work with. Anyway, i think i will give up on this one as it doesn't seem to be getting any better and neither are the comments, lol. thanx anyway.
bump* just keen to see wot comments i get outta this. i may try edit it again to make better. please leave tips you pixel artists :-P
hmmmmm roof is lil bare although it is gd, n wat is the orange fing on 1 of the trees?
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Originally Posted by .:Subarusti:.
the orange thing is actually a head. i will remove tht lol. tht was jst a joke but the tree is 2 small to be able 2 see the head, wot do u think should be added to the roof?
wow thats great! :o ill rep wen i can
ps 900th postie!
The pillar bits looks paper thin, fix that.
Im sorry, I thought it was fresh posted today :(
check the date this was 1st posted, it was july. so no i aint ripping it. i done it. get ur facts right!Quote:
Originally Posted by mr.parasols
no problem. i get worked up when people falsly accuse me of stuff. happened recently to me and now fallen out wit who i thought was one of my best m8s, so have most other people aswel. his loss, thought he could stir things up and make people fall out with me but truth eventually came out now he's the one who aint popular at all. but that was more extreme tht case. lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by mr.parasols
Bravo :D 9/10 :D
i can see the potential and i love the composition
thanx for feedback, here is a slight update of the alt
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y26...parkupdate.png
*bump* please look at the change and comment plz :-)