My Old House (Small but important update)

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As Ekalb said, I should keep all copy and paste down to a minimum, which I have done by removing most C+P and leaving only the characters as C+P,

I was going to post it in the old thread but i couldn't find it.

The main update here is on the windows and wood Floor.

Thank You, Please give me as much constructive criticism as possible so I can improve, also the roof cannot be made any straighter, i tied but no luck

Yours Sincerely,
Siz.

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9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep

Um.. The beige, light yellow w/e looks weird.. Kinda ruins it.
The rest is great though :)

it looks good but its missing a little umph, its to plain, maybe add window sills with plants on and a Gutter on the roof? then you should make a garden :D Still 9/10 though 1 is the missing umph.

The inside of the chimney should be dark.

Also try to put a shading on the house like 1 side darker than the other side so it will look more realistic. And ye I think if you put a lil more detail in the yellow bits like dunno some texture than it will look great.

And I hope you will be planning to add a garden etc :)

Good luck looking good so far! :)

Yeah, I don't like the top of the chimney. It's not very chimney like.

Isn't the roof wonky?

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Originally Posted by Nikki

9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep

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No it doesn't, It looks a bit thin at the top - that's all.

I think you should add more into the garden instead of just a really big green area. :) +rep

Looks really good.
Well done

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Originally Posted by Holofoil

Isn't the roof wonky?

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He's already said that he can't make it any straighter? Read the post!

It looks great well done!

Is it just me or it the top right window wrong. The floor inside looks higher than the other two. I dont know is just doesnt look right for some reason.

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Originally Posted by .-.eXtra.-.

The inside of the chimney should be dark.

Also try to put a shading on the house like 1 side darker than the other side so it will look more realistic. And ye I think if you put a lil more detail in the yellow bits like dunno some texture than it will look great.

And I hope you will be planning to add a garden etc :)

Good luck looking good so far! :)

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One side of the wood is darker than the other already but i don't think the change is strong enough, also the beige does have texture but again maybe the difference is not strong enough, I did try the chimney darker thing before but it didn't look good but I will try again, I also planned to make a garden at first but then I felt like I couldn't be bothered but I may try.

And to everyone else about the window ledges and flowers, I will try that out.

Thank You all for C+C

Yours Sincerely,
Simon.

I think its elite worthy ;) +rep

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Originally Posted by TitaniumRubber

One side of the wood is darker than the other already but i don't think the change is strong enough, also the beige does have texture but again maybe the difference is not strong enough, I did try the chimney darker thing before but it didn't look good but I will try again, I also planned to make a garden at first but then I felt like I couldn't be bothered but I may try.

And to everyone else about the window ledges and flowers, I will try that out.

Thank You all for C+C

Yours Sincerely,
Simon.

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Maybe just do the inside of the chimney black and add some smokish effect :)

I'd say add some shadows onto a certain side. That would be impressive. But so far quite excellent.

Hi Titrub/Siz, thought you left.

Ummm it's okay, a little basic, chimney is really messed up, and I think you could make this a ton better with some cracks in the wall, dirt in places just to remove the monotony of the peice.

Woah i love it. ELITE!

Before I get a mod to replace the image with my updated version, who thinks I should windows in the roof?

its good but where is the shading?

very good 9/10 ( chimney needs sorting but thats already been mentioned )