[Shel] First time posting my alt(s)

http://img.habboupload.com/1227035602.png
Wahey my first time posting an alt on the Habbox forum, I thought I'd show you all what I can attempt LOL, Yeah anyway this is an old WIP, I still need to make a bar, which I'm gonna make when I get round to it, obviously this is a crap alt so can you all give me some creative critisism and or ideas for it :) Thanks!

Don't mean to be mean but I don't believe that's ALL yours because some of it seems more advanced then others, but I guess that's instinct :D
Well done (if it's yours). :)
2 things, whats the thing outside the window? Also it could use a bit more :D

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

whats the thing outside the window? Also it could use a bit more :D

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a Windowsill :) and a bit more what?

That's awesome my fav bit is the computers 8/10 well done :D

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

Don't mean to be mean but I don't believe that's ALL yours because some of it seems more advanced then others, but I guess that's instinct :D
Well done (if it's yours). :)
2 things, whats the thing outside the window? Also it could use a bit more :D

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I kind of, Have to agree.

Also - On the fish tank? - On the bottom left corner the line goes diag up compared to carrying on, Then at the top it just carrys on like normal?

- There are a few obvious copy + paste jobs - So it doesn't all look like yours :S

The blue on some areas is a bit too much and looks like a bad recolour in some places :P
This could be improved loads,
Well done, If it is yours!

Hi, got any WIPs?

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Originally Posted by jackASS

Hi, got any WIPs?

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This is the fishy tank thingy - http://img.habboupload.com/1227039705.png
The floor is just a normal habbo floor a bit recoloured and i edited the size, the door is an IMP door, edited and recoloured, Windows are edited. Computer is something i found on google desks are edited from habbo club tables and benches are edited too from plasto stools. I dont have any more WIPs because my pc had to be wiped as I had spyware on it but my friend Ant saved the actual alt cause I sent it to him. I'm not bothered if you all say I've stolen it because I haven't I edited things and put them together, krantover.

Fair enough :)
Well done.
Also I mean a big more to cover the floor.

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

Fair enough :)
Well done.
Also I mean a big more to cover the floor.

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okay thanks!

Love it.
The colour of the room.
Lovely. 9/10

Kool i love it altho it mabe to good??
or
are you just good??

The windows look off.

You need to add a indent, as atm it looks like there is no wall :P

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Originally Posted by L?KE

The windows look off.

You need to add a indent, as atm it looks like there is no wall :P

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I know ive realised an error on the windows too LOL

not bad not bad :P the windowsills are a cool idea

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Originally Posted by Habtopia

not bad not bad :P the windowsills are a cool idea

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Thanks :)

I like it. ;p

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Originally Posted by Typoh

I like it. ;p

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Thanks ;D