New Public room

Sorry if this is the wrong place to post it but:

My New alt, I worked it about an hour or more... it was VERY hard..
but [B]I'M STILL WORKING ON IT, IT'S N-O-T DONE[/B] + No name for public room yet.

Please rate what I'v done untill now, and tell me if I need to improve anything.
Please be fair 'cus it was VERY hard making it...
Names for public room are ok :) What means u can free suggesting me names for the Cafe ;).

Don't tell I ripped things and claimed they'r mine so heres the:
CREDITS LIST::
Chairs,Tables - Made by kobi626
Floor, Walls, tiles - Made by kobi626
Entrance statue, Bonnie blondy (or how she called...) - Originally made by Sulake team, but been added and edited by kobi626.
Bars of Barman - Made by kobi626.
Barmen - Originally made by Sulake team, but been added and edited by kobi626.
Idea - Made by Kobi626.

I'll just want to mantion AGAIN that the public room isn't done, and I need to add more MANY stuff in it.
Right, heres the alt:

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3852/cafe9cd.png

Please be fair... :( Rate out of 10 the working untill now...

8/10 pretty good but for some reason theirs no entrance and the guys shirt looks weird

there is entrance ^^

it dosent look like a habbo public room entrance though you need to have four sqares sticking out

Not on every public room theres the squerz which pop out... :l

Be better when its finished cos its emty looking.
9/10

You just need a few touch up-s and it'll be good.

Chairs and tables look dodgey
So do the stools and entranceThe guy in the shirts face is strange
Good idea though
ALt: 5/10 (Much to be improved and isnt finished)
Idea: 10/10 - very good, HabboWood Hangout public room kind of thing

The bar looks weird, is it hanging from the walls? :s

The tables and chairs are alright but you should leave some space between them, people will be blocked and they'll have to reload the room, if they can still get in. ;)
Nice idea though, I'm looking forward to see the result.

Hmm. Good so far. First off, the walls need shading. One side, (I think the left one) needs to be darker than the other one. Second off, the wall on the right just cuts off the end square. Its very odd. Also, the bar doesnt look quite right. It should be one square thick.

Its Pretty Good , But The Chairs Along The Back Wall Look Wierd "/

Needs shading, Bonnies hand looks slightly strange, And do some sticking out squares for the netrance. 6/10 now, Add some more stuff!

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Originally Posted by kobi626

Sorry if this is the wrong place to post it but:

My New alt, I worked it about an hour or more... it was VERY hard..
but [B]I'M STILL WORKING ON IT, IT'S N-O-T DONE[/B] + No name for public room yet.

Please rate what I'v done untill now, and tell me if I need to improve anything.
Please be fair 'cus it was VERY hard making it...
Names for public room are ok :) What means u can free suggesting me names for the Cafe ;).

Don't tell I ripped things and claimed they'r mine so heres the:
CREDITS LIST::
Chairs,Tables - Made by kobi626
Floor, Walls, tiles - Made by kobi626
Entrance statue, Bonnie blondy (or how she called...) - Originally made by Sulake team, but been added and edited by kobi626.
Bars of Barman - Made by kobi626.
Barmen - Originally made by Sulake team, but been added and edited by kobi626.
Idea - Made by Kobi626.

I'll just want to mantion AGAIN that the public room isn't done, and I need to add more MANY stuff in it.
Right, heres the alt:

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3852/cafe9cd.png

Please be fair... :( Rate out of 10 the working untill now...

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=] Amazing work so far! Keep it up!
Ummm, I know its surposed to be a Cafe. But you could call it: Bonnie Blonde Bar or something. =P Just a thought.

pretty good..its not finished but i think it will look better when its finished.

8/10 so far,keep working on it,pillars r cool!

so far so good keep working on it
7/10

It look's ok, the bar kind of flies off onto the wall, bad isometrisism (Bad spelling lol - Ignore) Bonnie blonde need's work, her hair must have extra thick stronghold gel on it, as it's floating in the air on that flicking part. Her arm could look more relaxed, perhaps bend her arm? Add some fingers on the other side of the cup, she must be holding it with it with her palm or something. I'll have to see when it's finished, looking good though, nice idea, if not you, somone could do a johnny squabble version.

Bonnies arm doesnt look right and yes as micky said, the bar is kind of stuffed
Its like floating aswell as everything else i said in aprevious post

its a bit empty and the bot looks a little big to me. but i'm sure it will be better when your done. For now, 8/10.

The wallisn't attatched to the corner propersly, and the border thingy around the person is cutting into the wall, but it's good 7/10 so far, keep working