Tricky Stimulus - Ends 12th February

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I remember when I was in Primary School, that was the first time I did stimulus writing. Sometimes I had to write about an object, sometimes about a video clip or sometimes just a sentence opening. So I thought, who can find a good line for an object?

You simply need to write one sentence about this object for the introduction to a story!
Wait for it...
Wait for it..
It's an Electronic Guitar!

Well that was unexpected, wasn't it? Clauses are advised, but sometimes a smaller sentence can give the most impact on a story! Let's see if your English lessons have paid off, get writing!

1st Prize: 20 rep
2nd Prize: 15 rep

As I teared open the glossy christmas wrapping paper, I felt my heart rate increasing, I saw my electric guitar, in mint condition, and I SCREAMED thankyouu so much!!

i looked, there was , right in front of me , a , big , sexy , pink , ELECTRIC GUITAR!!!

Excitment, fustration and anxiety overwhelmed me when I couldn't open the box to my new, unique, fragile, electric guitar.

Her long wooden neck, her delicate polished curves, her strong metal strings - she was all mine, my fantastic electric guitar.

BANG! BANG! BANG! His electric guitar was shot front, back and centre.

Will :eusa_danc

IT WAS LOUD, ELECTRIFYING, AMPLIFIED! The baby of my life.

I saw her in my Brother's Hand , as elegant as a pretty English woman
She was Dancing to and fro on the wild wavy tunes and i was left dazzled by its beauty

i gave the present to my brother, he smiled at the huge size of it then slowly pulled at the wrapping paper, but hes a boy so he then ripped the wrapping paper clean off and said: " oh thanks Emma er wow? I don't know what to say" and then walked off to play on his new nintendo wii.

It sat, dusty in a corner, it's strings tinted with a hint of rust.

WOW a guitar... Thanks mum




xD :eusa_danc