New Public Room (Done) Must see xP

I finally finished the cafe I started ages ago and posted here.
I made two versions, One "Mocha cafe" and other "Sky Cafe".
I hope you'll like it :) rate out of 10 please be fair.

NOTICE: Please do not maximize the window when you click on the links because it will get the picture bigger.

"Mocha Cafe"
http://img76.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cafe3gz.png

"Sky Cafe"
(On the animated version which will come soon, the clouds will move - like in the hotel view :D)
http://img262.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cafesky7jy.png

Please leave you'r comment ^^.
Kobi626.

Cool bit big though, sup with bonies hair?

too bad i cant see neither of them ;]

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Originally Posted by samuel

too bad i cant see neither of them ;]

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wait 2 mins... I'm loading them again, cus' they'r too big :D

Sorry for double posting :D But I fixed the problem - Just click on the links ^^ enjoy...

they dont look too habbo stylee

Yes they do =l Looks like normal public room -.-

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Originally Posted by kobi626

Yes they do =l Looks like normal public room -.-

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Not really

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Originally Posted by Kekea

Not really

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How they'r not?

Needs more shading and Detail on the walls and floor Kob

And theres some other stuff, It does look a bit iffy, bit of patch work itll be brilliant

7/10

Well alot of the lines aren't completely isometric and there is many pixel errors, perhaps you should try and clean it up a little. Also, the two different public rooms look basically the same =/.

Thats Mint 11/10 Bonnie hair is gd and it shall look godd wen clouds move in sky cafe=] :D

First:
Blurry
No shading under the chairs and other stuff
Furni doesnt look shaded right
Many pixel errors around the place

same as above
add some depth to the windows

There is not should be different on the two versions =/. The only different that I ment is the walls. Not different public rooms.

pmsl poor kobi

i think they are both great an u get rep for doing a gd job and for being better than me

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Originally Posted by Diamondkid

pmsl poor kobi

i think they are both great an u get rep for doing a gd job and for being better than me

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Thanks mate ^^ It's really hard arguing with people who ignore the information I write before the pictures.. Harsh comment :[ worked on it hours :rolleyes: Oh well ty again mate :P.

Improve Shading, N It Will Beh Alot Better :D
Well Done Tho.

i could probably just about draw the chair
acutally not even that probs just the...um....nothing actually

theres a lot of pixel errors on the chairs and tables... and u could have added some different kinds of plants... and both rooms r the same except for wall colors... u could have atleast made them different styles...
5/10 for effort

fountain needs a bit of work, especially the left side of it >.< luks a bit strange like its tilting up

Wow dats nice 8/10

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Originally Posted by kobi626

I finally finished the cafe I started ages ago and posted here.
I made two versions, One "Mocha cafe" and other "Sky Cafe".
I hope you'll like it :) rate out of 10 please be fair.

NOTICE: Please do not maximize the window when you click on the links because it will get the picture bigger.

"Mocha Cafe"
http://img76.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cafe3gz.png

"Sky Cafe"
(On the animated version which will come soon, the clouds will move - like in the hotel view :D)
http://img262.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cafesky7jy.png

Please leave you'r comment ^^.
Kobi626.

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Add more Shadow, Color's and make it smaller and PNG, ok?
7.1/10 ;)

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Originally Posted by kobi626

Thanks mate ^^ It's really hard arguing with people who ignore the information I write before the pictures.. Harsh comment :[ worked on it hours :rolleyes: Oh well ty again mate :P.

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Hey, i wasnt critosizing you. I was just giving you a tip to make your alt even better. If people do not give you ideas, or tell you something, you will not get any better. If someone DOES Say something like that, then you can think "Oh, how can i improve that?" Its good, and i appreciate that it took alot of time.

I think the Mocha Cafe's Kitchen Area is on a slant and for both cafe's, you can't get to the chairs on the left against the wall? :s

Nice going 7/10 for Mocha Cafe
8/10 for Sky Cafe

:) + rep

Very colurless
Keep up the good work 7.27/10.00