The Incomplete yet Improved EMERALD COLLECTION

Hi you may Have read my previous post and seen the previous one which was rubbish Iv'e cleaned it up a bit and added to the collection.
Please give out of 10's (p.s this is my first ever collection)
Simeon1011

Emerald Sofa (re-mastered) Click Me

Emerald Staircase

Emerald Table (NEW)

Yes it is a bit poo but it's my first time at Habbo Furni Alts and it was done in Paint.
Please Rate and tell me what I should do to it!
Thanks, Simeon1011

5/10 loads of faults sorry :@

Thanks But what could actually make it better!?

nice ideas but a few minor pixel errors in them
about 7/10

its just squares.....

just green squares.... =\

4/10. try to make something other than squares.

Yeah...their quite nice apart from they are just squares. Wouldnt be comfy :p And the staircase is just sofas put together, was it meant to be like that???

Oh my gaaad, you're like sooo good.

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Originally Posted by Roboevil

Oh my gaaad, you're like sooo good.

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I think you meant he's the best.

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the sofa is odd, the stairs is just loads of sofas, and the table looks exactly like he plasto occasional talble, please dont ask me to rate, you wont be pleased

Mhmm, youre lines arent straight, you have mistakes in the same places, meaning you just copied and pasted, really badly.

Soz 4/10

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Originally Posted by Shadowrock!

its just squares.....

just green squares.... =\

4/10. try to make something other than squares.

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i second that... just big green squares :-/

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3...emerald6jr.png
My say on the picture..

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Originally Posted by simeon1011

Yes it is a bit poo but it's my first time and it was done in Paint.

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Using paint isnt an escuse.
7/10 for alt, make it more isometric, along with fixing the lines.

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Originally Posted by Roboevil

Oh my gaaad, you're like sooo good.

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sorry i just hate people when they do that. He's new to pixel art most probably so being sarcy because your better than someone isnt the right approach. Maybe you should give some constructive critisisum(however you spell it =D) as im sure he can learn from you as you are a good pixel artist.

The staircase looks more like a football stand or something, well thats what I think.

neaten it up thats all i got to sya ...

or get someone to do it for ya :) i'd more hen happy if ya payed me muahaha

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plz delete!!!

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