OH MY GOD :O

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YEubztwGe3I

hours of work so be kind
constructive criticism please
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is that you singing?

it sounds really good. Keep up the good work

Omg I love this! I love the way it just completely changes in the middle :) What did you use to record it?

yeah that is me :)
and thank youuu both so much
i actually used audacity ahah :P

what do you use to make the music?

fl studio :)

your pretty good with it, i used to use fl studio :)

i'd rep you but i cant :(

hehe i know thats ok :)

at the start of it you sound a bit like aiden grimshaw from the xfactor :o Quite good though, even though you are really quiet and the backings really loud!

really? i'll take that as a compliment haha :P yeah the volumes were bugging me a bit but it kept going either really loud or really quiet so i did what i could with it

Thats reallyyyyyy good. I had a go on fl studios once, I was awful at it. :L

thank you :)

I love it.
The start is a bit slow, but I love the bass-y bit :) +rep

thank you! :D

Omg Harry it's amazing!! You are so talented Mr! :'(

I love the start bit, it gives me shivers, and I also love the harmonies that come in at the end. The beat in the middle is just brilliant and it just all flows so well. Ima be listening to this all night now! :P Loveeeee it!

awww martin youre always soo kind to me i love youu :')

wow it's really good, i like what you did to make it sound like a mix of genres.
nice song :)

thank you :)

Aw that's really good I love it. Well done +rep

thank you :)

wowzas :o ... the backing over powers your voice a bit though, maybe turn it dowwnn?? && the echo really doesn't do much for your voice, i rly like it tho

ONE WORD: AMAZING

The singing is brilliant and tune is flawless.

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Originally Posted by Myke

wowzas :o ... the backing over powers your voice a bit though, maybe turn it dowwnn?? && the echo really doesn't do much for your voice, i rly like it tho

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Hmmmmm dunno bout the echo some parts I put a lot in on purpose but I'm gna have to do somethin about the volume ik. Thankyouuu :)

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Originally Posted by MrJordan

ONE WORD: AMAZING

The singing is brilliant and tune is flawless.

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This is like the best compliment ever thank you so much

Beat is good and the backing track is good, so if you made that really well done. can be a tad loud at times compared to the voice

however i do think the singing is rather....monotone. Its not horrible, but i dont think you should be looking at it as a career.

Good job anywho.

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Originally Posted by NaughtyNemo

however i do think the singing is rather....monotone. Its not horrible, but i dont think you should be looking at it as a career.

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can you explain a bit more what you mean by that? because i completely disagree. and i think i will carry on but thanks for your time anyway.

Like I've said before the vocals even went on, amazing amazing amazing.
You do sound a bit like Aidan Grimshore or whatever his name was, I wasn't a fan of his, but your vocals have gone really well with the music :)
How come your voice echos? it sounds good, but maybe without the echo it would sound better? :)
The music is just flawless, the echo in your voice just puts me off it a little bit :)
+rep if I can :)

Haha, it's really good! Love it.

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Originally Posted by Jessicrawrr

Like I've said before the vocals even went on, amazing amazing amazing.
You do sound a bit like Aidan Grimshore or whatever his name was, I wasn't a fan of his, but your vocals have gone really well with the music :)
How come your voice echos? it sounds good, but maybe without the echo it would sound better? :)
The music is just flawless, the echo in your voice just puts me off it a little bit :)
+rep if I can :)

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thanks :) well i dunno how to answer that question, i put it there? :P thank haha :)

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Originally Posted by /shifty

Haha, it's really good! Love it.

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thank you!

I absolutely love it! Great job! :P
At times though the vocals sound a bit weak, and like they need work but that'll come with practice and if a proper recording studio took this it could sound absolutely ******* amazing :)
Don't stop what you're doing!

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Originally Posted by iConz..

I absolutely love it! Great job! :P
At times though the vocals sound a bit weak, and like they need work but that'll come with practice and if a proper recording studio took this it could sound absolutely ******* amazing :)
Don't stop what you're doing!

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youre so wonderfullll thank you :) i know my voice isn't amazing but i try my best, but i have songs i did like a year ago and it's improving all the time so i'm not at my 'peak' or anything yet :P thank you so much :D

I think the tune and beat is actually pretty good! But the vocals aren't the best and the effects don't really help. :P

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Originally Posted by jackass

I think the tune and beat is actually pretty good! But the vocals aren't the best and the effects don't really help. :P

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Originally Posted by Haaaaarry

i know my voice isn't amazing but i try my best, but i have songs i did like a year ago and it's improving all the time so i'm not at my 'peak' or anything yet :P

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I am probably going to sound really critical, but I am trying to be constructive.

I don't think you have a great voice, but we will go over that as you can't help that.

The main thing for me, is when it got quite 'bassey' the volumes weren't quite right - I think your voice was too quiet, and the beat was too loud.

Why not download Cubase (or pirate it..), as you will probably find it a much better program for recording on.

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Originally Posted by Milestone

I am probably going to sound really critical, but I am trying to be constructive.

I don't think you have a great voice, but we will go over that as you can't help that.

The main thing for me, is when it got quite 'bassey' the volumes weren't quite right - I think your voice was too quiet, and the beat was too loud.

Why not download Cubase (or pirate it..), as you will probably find it a much better program for recording on.

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i have spoke about my voice in this thread so i will skip that comment
and i have used cubase before and i actually hate it but i appreciate your comment and your honesty thanks :)

I read what you said about your voice, and to be honest, I agree with Nemo.

each to their own, thank you for your opinion :)