Wedding Dress [Finished]

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And here is the finished version! Well, I will probably end up editing it as my alts are never perfect! Tell me what you think :D Enjoy :)

Woo! This is really nice! :)

Thanks Tom :)x

It's great, could do with a bit more shading at the top areas thoughxxxxx

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Originally Posted by Midnight

http://i56.tinypic.com/98enbp.png
And here is the finished version! Well, I will probably end up editing it as my alts are never perfect! Tell me what you think :D Enjoy :)

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The shading it quite hard to see tbh and, in my opinion, there are too many indents on the dress at the bottom and maybe the belt ribbon thing could look nicer in a dark red? Also the fact that she is picking up the dress seems to really do no affect to the lower half of the dress. Good effort though, perhaps expand it further to the head + some scenery?

I really like it, you've done a good job! Well done

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

The shading it quite hard to see tbh and, in my opinion, there are too many indents on the dress at the bottom and maybe the belt ribbon thing could look nicer in a dark red? Also the fact that she is picking up the dress seems to really do no affect to the lower half of the dress. Good effort though, perhaps expand it further to the head + some scenery?

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The bottom half of the dress isn't attached to the bit going over it, so the bottom bit doesn't really need to go up, and i thought the bottom might need less indents :') Thanks for the feedback ;3

I think you could of used darker colours to shade as its really hard to see now

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I've changed the colour of the bow :) I think i prefer it red too :P

Their criticism is fair, yet I do think you've done a beautiful job anyways, improving on the criticism would just make it 100% perfect and no one hits that on their first go :D

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Originally Posted by Midnight

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I've changed the colour of the bow :) I think i prefer it red too :P

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i Like it better in this color :)

i just think it needs a lil more texture but otherwise its ok

Mhm, a little more texture on the shoulder ruffles would do a treat :) make them layered perhaps? Possibly a slight change in where the dress is being held or the position of the hand or something :P because it doesn't look like anything is holding it up :).

I preferred the bow at first. But nice job anyway.

Nice, next you should make a grooms suit? do you mind if i make a edition?

looks like you've just added a ribbon to your WIP and called it finished. I like the blue ribbon rather than the red as the colour isn't so harsh.

Use a darker colour than just plain white and to show ruffles, folds, shadow, etc. and use a darker blue.

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I'm not sure if i like the arm bit. But what do you think?

@peanut, i don't mind no :)

Those actually look really nice, good work! +Rep

owow, i really like these :)!

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Originally Posted by Midnight

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I've changed the colour of the bow :) I think i prefer it red too :P

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thats unreal =] =] i loveeeee it hehe make me 1 lol jks im a boy :(

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I preferred the bow at first. But nice job anyway.

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Agreed, the blue bow wasn't has harsh and looked more 'wedding-like'.

Nicely done and very attractive. I like it in red too. :)

Very nice :) Well done. If im having a wedding in Habbo i will definitely get my girlfren to wear that :)

I think you've done a magnificent job, but in all honesty I think the shape of the bottom half of the dress is a bit.. out, if you get what I mean. It's where she picks up the dress, and if you look closely it just looks a bit strange, but that's just me being picky as usual. Well done :P

Thanks for the feedback :D

Thanks guys :)!