Belle/Beauty out of beauty and the beast.
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/y...ckzx/belle.png
ik the hairbands weird
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Belle/Beauty out of beauty and the beast.
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/y...ckzx/belle.png
ik the hairbands weird
It looks a bit flat to me, don't know what though. maybe more noticable shading could improve this!
I personally like it but maybe you could change the head angle , But everything else looks good!
yeah the headband is weird :P the hair is really nice though, her dress could be improved by more noticeable shading.
i should probably mention it looks like she's facing towards the front instead of to the side because of the way you've shaded the dress.
the head band looks nice but l think it'll look nice if u got rid of the bit closer to the end of the hair after the bow but i dunno
Its not the shading making it look wonky its the button and straps they should be more to the right as she is at a 45 degree angle. I do love the dress and hair though Charlotte, well done hehehe (:
it's so cute! :)
The body shape needs alot of work but the coloring is good. Nice try
she started off with a white blanck habbo tho btw so? :S
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/y.../bascstart.pngQuote:
Originally Posted by Yuxin
:P gina i just positioned =7t wrong xD
Hairband looks weird cos it's meant to go in at the ears & how the hair pushes it out on the right side.Quote:
Originally Posted by Rokgalisevil
Starting from top to bottom:
The hair - I think the shading on this is generally OK (could be a bit more detailed on the side of the hair I'd say), but the line art of it isn't great and the right side puffs out too much, in my opinion.
The top of the dress (the bit on the arms/shoulders) - This isn't really positioned right. On the left side it seems to be on the edge of her shoulder whereas on the right side it's half way down her arm. I think a problem with the position of those might be the positioning of the ball thing they're linked too, as it's too low and too far to the right as if you were to look at it from the front, it wouldn't be centered.
The arms - Only a small problem, but the right arm (her left) is infront of the dress.
The dress - Overall, the shading is really hard to see. On the 2nd half, the "sections" of the dress aren't really in perspective at all the ones on the sides should be the smallest not the largest and the one in the middle should be the largest. I also thing the line art could be much better, being much less circle on the bottom (like the actual dress where it goes in and out according to the creases) and on the right it puffs out too much too quickly. The golden bits which go along should follow the dress much more aswell and when it reaches the top of the crease, it should go in and not be the same size all the way through and again, shading isn't obvious. Final thing, you shouldn't use black lines in the same object only to seperate objects if you get what I mean?
It's ok, but I think the shading could be improved, aswell as the bottom of the dress - I think it just looks odd. Also I think the headband needs to be improved by perhaps not making it go all around the head (if that made any sense :S). Very good effort though! :P
Yeah the headband needs work. It's meant to sort of put your hair back behind your ears! The shading towards the middle/bottom of the dress needs improving too..
However it is cute!