My try at a habbo person alt

ok this is my first go at habbo people alts i followed no tuts.
http://oi40.tinypic.com/rk7zn9.jpg

I understand you were trying to make the habbo look like that person, but honestly it looks a little odd. :S

is the long thing an arm i dont really get it lol

er i really think you should follow some tutorials, it could help a lot and theres loads of jagged lines etc

You need to learn shading and also learn line art; I suggest trying something simpler first.

Maybe a few videos might help you with basics!
Its not to bad though.

it sort of mirrors the picture, more detail needed and as [@]@samanfa[/@] stated, work on your line art :)

This is a lot better than I could do, not even lying,

I think for a first attempt with no guidance, it's a pretty nice attempt...

But I do think you should have a look at some tutorials though, as the above people have said :)

Considering you've never used any tutorials and it's your first attempt, it's pretty good. The arm is huge, and although the character may have a long arm in the thing, I don't think it looks right on the smaller one! :P I'd keep working, keep trying and watch tutorials so you can improve! :)

OPPS this the pic i used to make it. LOL ( its cosplay) ( and it not me :/ )
http://www.acparadise.com/cosplayers...08-17723-1.jpg

Looks rather good :-)

That cosplay is awful , just saying.

The ALT looks ok. But i think you need more shading and the hair should be longer ? :)

if it was that picture i am not to sure you would get a good job with it !

i don't think the sleeve needs to be that long