MALE Bunny interrupted by Cat

First, feel free to post a comment on how it looks :) It only took me twenty or so minutes, and I used two, well, three, resources. The head, a little of the body, and the cat. Let me know what you think, and to be honest it looks okay to me :) :
http://i.imgur.com/IFUU3.png
also, yes, I notice the hands are a little messed up. I'm bad with hands. Some lines are a little too close, but it doesn't affect it much. First hand is screwed up. Bunny is a man. Okay, so what do you think?

The hands are alright but the outline around his body is to thick. Welldone

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Originally Posted by Nick

The hands are alright but the outline around his body is to thick. Welldone

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Thanks! And I see that now, will work on it.

Edit: Fixed it:
http://i.imgur.com/FNl2O.png
hopefully line is a bit 'cleaner'

That looks a lot better :)

This looks better then what it did before, but what's the odd bump near his leg? I also thing the shading is to heavy for the background colour, change it to a lighter tone. Over then that, well done :)

Tbh shadow is too dark, and as Maria said the bulge is really weird, other than that I quite like it.

I Like it!

Also the shadow under both the bunny and dog is cut off.

i like it, its amusing well done

very good, the second version is much better but as people have mentioned, the bump on the hip area looks abit odd and the hand that is up too the face looks rather thin in comparison to the other one!

well done tho! +rep :D

haha, that's really cool! well done :-)

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Originally Posted by Ellz

very good, the second version is much better but as people have mentioned, the bump on the hip area looks abit odd and the hand that is up too the face looks rather thin in comparison to the other one!

well done tho! +rep :D

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Originally Posted by J25T

Also the shadow under both the bunny and dog is cut off.

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Originally Posted by Pipette

Tbh shadow is too dark, and as Maria said the bulge is really weird, other than that I quite like it.

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Originally Posted by Diistrict

This looks better then what it did before, but what's the odd bump near his leg? I also thing the shading is to heavy for the background colour, change it to a lighter tone. Over then that, well done :)

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Thanks and sorry I haven't replied very soon, I had to go to worship all things learning a.k.a school :P Actually still at school, I will get these done as soon as I can. The buldge is his butt, will fix it :) Also, I'll fix the shadow and the shading, and I'll fix the hand. I'm on school computer and teachers are watching, don't make sudden movements. I'll post an edit once I get it done. Thanks for the feedback, btw :)!

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Originally Posted by Meloneeze.

Thanks and sorry I haven't replied very soon, I had to go to worship all things learning a.k.a school :P Actually still at school, I will get these done as soon as I can. The buldge is his butt, will fix it :) Also, I'll fix the shadow and the shading, and I'll fix the hand. I'm on school computer and teachers are watching, don't make sudden movements. I'll post an edit once I get it done. Thanks for the feedback, btw :)!

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Edit: I changed both hands to make them equal. I made the shading in an area lighter, and darkened certain points. Have I ever mentioned I don't use photoshop? So, it was incredibly hard to make it a lighter color, but I think I pulled it off. Also, if you have concerns let me know, I appreciate it!
http://i.imgur.com/Kc0h9.png
Also, shadow is lighter. And I forgot to thank everybody, so thanks again :) Pfft, won't allow me to edit posts..