Some alts

These are mainly my old stuff but wanted feedback on them :P. Mainly enlargements and some other stuff too lmao!

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http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/e7Xyj.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/5jRvg.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/tSzA1.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/QvPNS.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/ypjQK.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...07/03/BOu7.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/BrtmE.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/voOVL.png
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http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...07/03/mMqr.png
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http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/cdGqi.png
http://www.mattgarner.net/upload/ima...7/03/XiD5U.png

Some aren't done and I just uploaded those that I thought would get feedback.

By the way these are old and some have been posted before, I've improved on some dw.

Oh thats pretty cool stuff youve got here! :) i can see you have spent your time on these! :) good work.

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Thank you, some were easy as some you can just recolour and stuff. I'm going to improve some of these though (probably going to stay away from enlargements for a bit though :)).

Great job :D

But some of the edges/lines on the resized furni aren't exactly straight and a bit "wavy", like on the back of the speakers corner. Other than that they look good!

Oh yeah, I think that's because I copy too much from it and it wasn't meant to be that big lmao! Thank you :D!

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Spaceship doors - good enlargements, but the turquoise (light blue) one has a white pixel error on the top bit. Also the lines over the top aren't in the middle!!

Speaker corner - the top bit isn't even, goes really thin at one point

Habbo Enlargements - all the eyes are still pixelated whilst the rest is detailed. Also sure you realise there's a gaping hole on the first one!

I love my pencil. End of.

Furni enlargements are really nice, j/w whether the black sofa thing will look better if the cushion part would look better actually straight, although techincally not following the original pattern! Obv the lamp isn't finished but the circles (base and lights) aren't very circular aha :P

Habbo hair alts... idk they look a bit strange, the shading looks very pixely and not very natural, and the one with the yellow hoody looks MASSIVE! I like the one with the jumpsuit though!

YOUR ENLARGEMENTS ARE JUST AMAZING HREFDHGDSHRED

the only fault i can spot is with the speaker corner, at the top it's really uneven and goes rather thin - but apart from that i think they're all really good fab work sam!!!!

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Just realised @Hanndee; that's your old enlargement I did :P.

Also thanks Chels and Laura, the Speaker's Corner was first I did so it was like rly old not sure how old hmm. Over 2 years I think but ty :D!

Oh da frog is nice^ + As others have said, Speaker's Corner doesn't look that amazing enlarged due to it going too thin.

Also, on the Glass Stool, the corner closest to... yourself irl idk looks un-complete? It doesn't seem to have been shaded/even coloured in correctly at one part. Or am I seeing things?

Pixel eyes look faulty when enlarged, but apart from that the enlargements are fantastic Sam :)

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Oh da frog is nice^ + As others have said, Speaker's Corner doesn't look that amazing enlarged due to it going too thin.

Also, on the Glass Stool, the corner closest to... yourself irl idk looks un-complete? It doesn't seem to have been shaded/even coloured in correctly at one part. Or am I seeing things?

Pixel eyes look faulty when enlarged, but apart from that the enlargements are fantastic Sam :)

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The frog isn't mine it was because the enlarged shoes looked silly so I put it across before.

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The frog isn't mine it was because the enlarged shoes looked silly so I put it across before.

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Oh LMAO. It's still good though :( Also, the avatar with yellow hoodie and super long hair is brilliant.

Oh, btw the enlarged Duvan - the bit where the towel goes over the sides looks really jagged/slightly messy? :l

Lol thank you :3.

I love the enlargement of the Speaker's Corner especially but they're all very good, just some of the monoliths need some touching up (some white pixels lurking) :)

Ah thanks Dean, they're so old I can't even remember doing them really but ty :D!

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Just realised @Hanndee; that's your old enlargement I did :P.

Also thanks Chels and Laura, the Speaker's Corner was first I did so it was like rly old not sure how old hmm. Over 2 years I think but ty :D!

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I thought mine was one with the electric blue hair haha :L i used to do these but I always failed ;L

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I thought mine was one with the electric blue hair haha :L i used to do these but I always failed ;L

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Hmm maybe it was this could have been Scarlet's :P.

Big, BIG fan of enlargements, as you probably know :P
I love all the habbo ones,
Except the hair on a couple is a little off,
And of course, the speakers corner does have some problems, but, I couldn't do it!
So, well done to you :D!

LOL thanks Tom, when I saw you replied I smiled as I knew you loved them ;). ty again xxx. CAPITALISE Habbo though @:odey:;

Very nice but some of the eyes and smiles seem a little pixelated at times. Also I see the pixel error on the turquoise gate


Overall, some nice stuff here! Good Job! :) Keep it up!

I forgot to say that I haven't edited the eyes, I'm not good with them so when I did them I left them most of the time! Thank you though :3.

Your enlargements are brilliant Sam, lovely quality aswell! Good job

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Thanks, they're not perfect though so anyways I can improve?

These are really nice :) Some of the enlarged ones are kinda grain-y :S was that just because they're enlarged?

Good job though!

Will comment on what I can be bothered to. not much to fault in the furni enlargements as they're pretty straightforward and most are just a matter of making the lines longer.

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pencil looks odd! more of a metallic cylinder with a pencil inside it. make the nib bigger so it actually looks like it's attached to the rest of the pencil rather than inside it and perhaps consider easing up on the amount of colours used.

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weird blob heind ear and his right hand ( <- ) looks like more of a fin. other hand seems to somehow go under the lines of the top rather than over, probably could do with a darker shade on the inner arm. shoes are a bit of a mess, don't really look like the originals.

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some blobs around chin and between feet. hair looks too... idk... liney? try dithering to get it looks more like hair.

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again a few blobs between the feet and around the chin! hands look too lego.

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hairband doesn't look finished. shoes are good, but tongues maybe aren't big enough. mouth looks sewn up too lol she looks like a character from the grinch. perhaps widen the lighter shade on the pigtails too to give them more depth.

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another grinch style mouth. try bringing the lines above the mouth in line with the chin. looks like she has had some kind of breast removal operation too so try lowering that right hand line slightly to bring them into equillibrium. toes are the best ones you've done.

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hair lacks shading but shoes are fab. four fingers on right hand but only three on the left? sort that out.

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no shading on hair again :( sandals could do with a little touch up and mouth looks really weird, like he has a mouth full of something waiting to spit it out. also this guy has some weird moob flopping over his arm?

I know you've said you probably wouldn't do anything with this but I felt some of that needed pointing out!!! General advice for future if you ever decide to come back to this or start new ones is to always notice parts of your alts that look good and don't be afraid to reuse them to save time. hands, feet, shoes, hair - anything really - if you don't think it can be improved further then don't spend time redrawing it when you can just paste it on, nobody'll notice! Also if something doesn't look right/the same in the enlarged version then don't be afraid to change the lineart around a little. Keep at it, some really good work there :) Keep experimenting with eyes too, I'm sure you'll manage it eventually!!!

@Kyle; Actually lolling at 'moob flopping over his arm.' I totally forgot I didn't do shading on that, I thought I did lmao!

Erm I think on the yellow one I might have thought that the 4th finger (the one nearest to the body) was the thumb like on the other hand if you get me? However I will take your CC on board and I'll try improve them.

Also the pencil I didn't create it was more of Laura behind it as it was a simple alt :P.

Thanks for the contrast in comments and I'll see what I can do :D!

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Hmm maybe it was this could have been Scarlet's :P.

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Thats who that one is ! You speak to her anymore?

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Thats who that one is ! You speak to her anymore?

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Nope, I forgot her Habbo name too :( wbu?

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Nope, I forgot her Habbo name too :( wbu?

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it's Scase but she went to rs I think so i dont know :(

Ah ok, thank you :D