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01-10-2012, 01:07 AM
auffant1

First Signature

My first attempt at a signature with the help of @Nick;. Kept it simpel and basic, yet affective. Tell me what you think :).

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/...0/01/T18YH.png
01-10-2012, 05:59 AM
Succubus

I like it Jason, and It's good for a first try.
Just not too sure on that red text "Assistant Rare Values Manger" Just looks to hard on the background personally.
Other then that I like it :)
01-10-2012, 10:33 AM
:odey:

It's cute,
But personally I would have used volter in white with a bold stroke for the 'ARV Manager' bit,
But apart from that, it's a good start :)
Also a little plain though...
01-10-2012, 11:43 AM
lawrawrrr

Lovely simple start!! Like the others have said the bottom text is a bit difficult to read but it's still not bad for a first attempt. Are you using GIMP?
01-10-2012, 12:23 PM
David

with broken habbos its best to screenshot it and chop it out, instead of all the errors
plus what they said
01-10-2012, 04:07 PM
KymKo

Great for your first attempt. I wouldnt pick the red color as its abit hard to see!. try useing a white or a color that will stand out of that silvery backing
01-10-2012, 05:22 PM
Ellz

its a nice first attempt but i agree with others that you need to change the red text! :)
01-10-2012, 06:23 PM
RandomManJay

Nice. Maybe the "Assistant Rare Values Manager" could be in the volter font (same colour) and put slightly underneath the Jason. Also "Manager" is spelt incorrectly.
01-10-2012, 06:31 PM
Samantha

I think it needs to be smaller, maybe add borders round you and the candle. Yeah spell Manager right silly :P. However, I think it's ok :D!
02-10-2012, 12:20 PM
LiquidLuck.

''Manger''? LOL Means ''to eat'' in french xD
02-10-2012, 01:34 PM
MultiKaching

It looks great! I like the "Jason" text, but I agree with the others that the small text should probably be different. I don't know if it's just me going crazy, but somehow the Habbo and candle just looked slapped on. Maybe add a border, drop shadow, or something? Could be just me though, haha.

I still like it a lot though, and it's especially good for your first one.
02-10-2012, 05:49 PM
geo

Agree with others, the red text really does need a change. Also, I think the candle and the Habbo should be more aligned or something, the skull looks a little too high. :P
02-10-2012, 08:20 PM
Aiden

It's alright but the red text is kinda hard to read and the Jason text is a little too small. Also the pictures arnt even. But that's coming from someone who can't even open paint lol. :) WD anyway!
03-10-2012, 12:25 AM
auffant1

Quote:

Originally Posted by Polarisation

I like it Jason, and It's good for a first try.
Just not too sure on that red text "Assistant Rare Values Manger" Just looks to hard on the background personally.
Other then that I like it :)

Fixed the red text :).

Quote:

Originally Posted by :odey:

It's cute,
But personally I would have used volter in white with a bold stroke for the 'ARV Manager' bit,
But apart from that, it's a good start :)
Also a little plain though...

I kept it plain and simple :P. Wanted it to be like that for a first try :L.

Quote:

Originally Posted by laura

Lovely simple start!! Like the others have said the bottom text is a bit difficult to read but it's still not bad for a first attempt. Are you using GIMP?

Thanks! Fixed text btw.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hulk

with broken habbos its best to screenshot it and chop it out, instead of all the errors
plus what they said

Not sure what you mean but ya :P.

Quote:

Originally Posted by KymKo

Great for your first attempt. I wouldnt pick the red color as its abit hard to see!. try useing a white or a color that will stand out of that silvery backing

Fixed text!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ellz

its a nice first attempt but i agree with others that you need to change the red text! :)

Fixed!

Quote:

Originally Posted by RandomManJay

Nice. Maybe the "Assistant Rare Values Manager" could be in the volter font (same colour) and put slightly underneath the Jason. Also "Manager" is spelt incorrectly.

Oops haha. Fixed the spelling and made it volter white!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samanfa

I think it needs to be smaller, maybe add borders round you and the candle. Yeah spell Manager right silly :P. However, I think it's ok :D!

Added a borders around the text but chose not to with the images :P. Fixed spelling too lol.

Quote:

Originally Posted by LiquidLuck.

''Manger''? LOL Means ''to eat'' in french xD

Don't see the point in this post tbh. This isn't giving me advice nor are commenting on the alt......

Quote:

Originally Posted by MultiKaching

It looks great! I like the "Jason" text, but I agree with the others that the small text should probably be different. I don't know if it's just me going crazy, but somehow the Habbo and candle just looked slapped on. Maybe add a border, drop shadow, or something? Could be just me though, haha.
Haha your not alone. But I like the kind of overlaying look if that makes sense :P. Fixed text also.
I still like it a lot though, and it's especially good for your first one.

Something about the overlaying I like lol. Fixed smaller text also!

Quote:

Originally Posted by McDonalds

Agree with others, the red text really does need a change. Also, I think the candle and the Habbo should be more aligned or something, the skull looks a little too high. :P

Fixed alignment and text :).

Quote:

Originally Posted by ,AAiden

It's alright but the red text is kinda hard to read and the Jason text is a little too small. Also the pictures arnt even. But that's coming from someone who can't even open paint lol. :) WD anyway!

Fixed text and alignment!

Ok so I went back and toke your guys advice and came out with this:

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png

Added volter white text with border around it and aligned the images! +Rep for everyone who helped, thanks a lot guys :).
03-10-2012, 05:56 AM
Succubus

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png

Added volter white text with border around it and aligned the images! +Rep for everyone who helped, thanks a lot guys :).

That's much better, well done :)
03-10-2012, 07:30 AM
KymKo

Thanks!
03-10-2012, 10:35 AM
lawrawrrr

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

Ok so I went back and toke your guys advice and came out with this:

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png

Added volter white text with border around it and aligned the images! +Rep for everyone who helped, thanks a lot guys :).

muuuuuch better jason!! the only thing i'd improve on is the habbo, as it doesnt look right (habbo imagers mess up with certain clothes. sometimes it's easier to take a screenshot and cut the background out so it looks right, but that's just nitpicking.

i also don't know much about text in gimp but in photoshop i'd turn anti-alias on for the 'Jason' text as it looks very pixelated. I'll have a play and find out how to do it in gimp for you :)
03-10-2012, 06:06 PM
LiquidLuck.

@auffant1; it's obviously letting you know about the mistake so there is a purpose kty.
03-10-2012, 07:18 PM
Seikou

i like the second version a lot better, the bottom text being fixed really makes all the difference. well done!
03-10-2012, 09:01 PM
Teabags

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

My first attempt at a signature with the help of @Nick;. Kept it simpel and basic, yet affective. Tell me what you think :).

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/...0/01/T18YH.png

do like it. Can't ever have enough pairs of shades.
04-10-2012, 12:09 AM
auffant1

Quote:

Originally Posted by Teabags

do like it. Can't ever have enough pairs of shades.

Hehehehe if I lose one then I have the other pair ;). See my logic.

Quote:

Originally Posted by LiquidLuck.

@auffant1; it's obviously letting you know about the mistake so there is a purpose kty.

Letting me know about the mistake would be something like, "You spelled manager wrong." Not giving me a French lesson.
04-10-2012, 06:01 AM
Gina

it looks cute haha
dont like the text rly
and why am i not in it?? omg
quackquack
04-10-2012, 02:15 PM
Shockwave.2CC

Love it but as Maria said and maybe the others, that the red writing what says 'Assistant Rare Values Manager' is a little to bright
04-10-2012, 03:52 PM
,Abbey

Manager is spelt wrong and text colour could be changed otherwise it's beautiful :)
04-10-2012, 09:13 PM
auffant1

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shockwave.2CC

Love it but as Maria said and maybe the others, that the red writing what says 'Assistant Rare Values Manager' is a little to bright

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abzkewl

Manager is spelt wrong and text colour could be changed otherwise it's beautiful :)

Changed it up a litte:

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png
04-10-2012, 09:19 PM
Shockwave.2CC

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

Changed it up a litte:

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png

That one looks better
05-10-2012, 09:49 AM
Nick

Very nice Jason :) I do think the skull looks weird just being there ya know.. But its very nice :)
05-10-2012, 10:29 AM
auffant1

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick

Very nice Jason :) I do think the skull looks weird just being there ya know.. But its very nice :)

Ooo hello Nick ;). Welcome back!!!! As for the skull I went for like a Halloweenish design ('Jason' text, slated background). So I figured that kinda fits in :P.
06-10-2012, 09:04 AM
,Abbey

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

Changed it up a litte:

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/2012/10/03/5vhm.png

Much better :)
06-10-2012, 08:48 PM
Rainbow

looks much better now nice work :)
06-10-2012, 10:01 PM
LiquidLuck.

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

Letting me know about the mistake would be something like, "You spelled manager wrong." Not giving me a French lesson.

Amazing sense of humour. And the candle could glow btw.
06-10-2012, 10:29 PM
auffant1

Quote:

Originally Posted by LiquidLuck.

Amazing sense of humour. And the candle could glow btw.

I'm not looking for a laugh I'm looking for improvement with my graphics skills.

What do you mean by glow?
06-10-2012, 11:03 PM
Nick

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

I'm not looking for a laugh I'm looking for improvement with my graphics skills.

What do you mean by glow?

She means by making it into a gif so then your glow of the candle will be animated.
07-10-2012, 01:59 AM
LiquidLuck.

''Why so Sirius?'' LOL

And what Nick said.
08-10-2012, 09:34 AM
Andii

Quote:

Originally Posted by auffant1

My first attempt at a signature with the help of @Nick;. Kept it simpel and basic, yet affective. Tell me what you think :).

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/...0/01/T18YH.png

This is completely crap I expect way better for a first time. Lol jokes

It's not bad I. Wouldn't have used red as its quite hard to read :) ye needa fix your hair unless your going grey ;) hehe lovely job as the background and writing style :) use blue lmao