Few of my song lyirics

Ok worked on em for years lol go tliek a album...

This one was inspired by a ex gf who dumped meh for theee reasons on here lol

You Don't Need Him

Many moons ago, a cold September face
You felt like dying alone, in a dark and distant place
You said you couldn’t carry on, the wires getting thin
I told you to hold on in, and to live your life again
You wanted to listen, but you really didn’t care
There was so many people there for you, the world was at your feet

So get up from that lonely state
Being on your own will make your world a better place
You don’t need a man to run your life
‘Cos all you’ll do is sacrifice
Be Strong, cos you don’t need him

I pray that someday you find the piece of mind to be free
To not crave someone who carries a burden upon you
To long to be happy, happy in yourself
If you turn that glum face round
Happiness will come your way
You’ll feel loved again

So get up from that lonely state
Being on your own will make your world a better place
You don’t need a man to run your life
‘Cos all you’ll do is sacrifice
Be Strong, cos you don’t need him

Forget all those times your hearts been torn in two
Remember who’s always stuck to you like glue
Remember who’s been there for you
All remember I’ll always be too

So get up from that lonely state
Being on your own will make your world a better place
You don’t need a man to run your life
‘Cos all you’ll do is sacrifice
Be Strong, cos you don’t need him

So get up from that lonely state
Being on your own will make your world a better place
You don’t need a man to run your life
‘Cos all you’ll do is sacrifice
Be Strong, cos you don’t need him

This one is for my current relationship lol (im not a ho ;) ) Messing hope u like

No Doubt

I was down and lonely, needing shelter from this storm
Some comfort in this hard time
Some strength to carry on
No-One Seemed To Notice me
No-one seemed to even care
Apart from only you girl
You've always been there

To pick me up, off my feet
Turn my life upside down
Show me there's more to life than doubt
When you love what you've got today
Bad Days become your stranger
The sun will always shine
'Cos only you girl, make my world go round

I get up out of bed at the break of dawn
The sun is beaming down
I think about the good times
Always smiling, Never a frown
But now we've been together, you make me feel great
Through bad and good, i'll know you'll be there
My ever saving grace

To pick me up, off my feet
Turn my life upside down
Show me there's more to life than doubt
When you love what you've got today
Bad Days become your stranger
The sun will always shine
'Cos only you girl, make my world go round

I'll never doubt our love again
I'll never doubt your trust again
Cos Girl I love you, forever

To pick me up, off my feet
Turn my life upside down
Show me there's more to life than doubt
When you love what you've got today
Bad Days become your stranger
The sun will always shine
'Cos only you girl, make my world go round
'Cos only you girl, make my world go round
Make my world go round!

Fade

this one was for the bordem the othe rday lol

The Notebook

She threw the notebook away, our notebook,
She got rid of the history, again she wouldn't look,
Remember page fifteen though? The ice-cream?
Butter fudge with coke, tasty you made it seem.
That bitter taste of it though, doesn't it taste so real?
That taste of realism, as though with fate it struck a deal.
But what deal shall it behold, as bitterness doesn't compare,
To the sweetness of us, so dear, so rare.

What about that page... Page forty nine?
When I finally had you, make-up smudged, you were mine.
Are you going to heave those all away to breathe their last?
Eerie how what we were, to what we are. Not too fast?
Books only last so long, but what's in them remains,
And the longer it stays, the more it gains.

And page sixty two, the true beginning of me and you,
In our red car, midnight, kiss. Was it all true?
Was it all real? Or was it just a sick game you played?
Did you mean it? Or the price of your trust I had paid?
The silence of the roads, the coldness of the air,
The whistles you blew… that striking stare?
Tear that page out, as no truth it doesn't hold,
Change. Move on. The past with poison I shall fold.


The Last page. The end. The start.
The flow of the tears, the break of the heart.
And to write on that misery, to keep hold of the pain?
Tear. Tear. Tear. Flush down the drain.
That last page. Of the notebook, and of those times,
As we listen to the big clock, "its over" it chimes

*Edited by Janeh - Please don't triple post

Noone cares and stop triple posting

I thnk the use of rhymes is great, and some might care

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Originally Posted by TheSoftParade

Noone cares and stop triple posting

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Oh ok sorry just thought id share it with you and this how i always post when i got somethign new sorry


@ Kierran cheers m8 means alot to me :)

No problem :)

They're pretty good xD

thanks jashmine :)

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Originally Posted by TheSoftParade

Noone cares and stop triple posting

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Hey you, shut up, people do care, and you should just go away cuz nobody wants you here

Hey i got a song for ya'z all it kinda relates to me being at skool lool

I remember when i woz at school
they treated me like i woz a fool
punished me for try'na act cool
they sat me in a class facin the wall
others had a laugh but no fun for me
i had maths when they had p.e.
i practised for my gcse
i woz told the rest were better than me
in english everyone got c
not me they gave me a g
pushed and kicked by all the bully
cut my head on the ground
and grazed up my knee
sent to school on every birthday
an hours detention every friday
i had to work when others could play
so i said f**k this i'll be a dj

but no, i became an m.c.
and all of the kru just listened to me
coz they knew i had potential u see
and they all knew that i had it in me
more respect come day by d'g day
bullys moved rite out of my way
all becoz one day i sed hey
im vapour and im havin my say

five days a week im workin so hard
wanna keep chilling cool in my yard
i cant be freed never can be barred
im no laughin stock
im no picture card
doolally im goin insane
im a m-m-m-maniac mashin your brain
i told u once to go thru it again
that i run your block and im your pain
im insane in the membrane
im a m-m-m-maniac mashin your brain
give a double uppercut like Lenny McClean
insane in the m-n-m-m-n-membrane
insane in the m-n-m-m-n.....
......g-g-g-go vapour rollin this show

football, volleyball, basketball,
its really cool, radical,
not for the silly fool,
racket ball, tennis ball,
squash ball, proper small,
emma harrison, jordan, proper tool,
golf ball, baseball, lets get tropical,
netball, softball, im never gonna fall,
4 star, diesel, come with the rocket fuel,
no alcohol when ur on a call

pam anderson, silicon dappa don,
when im on the mic im a lyrical rapper man,
rip up the dance floor, im a tapper man,
back 2 back, like a lyrical kappa man,
agitate, irritate, levitate, hesitate,
motivate, activate,
agitate, irritate, levitate, hesitate,
box full of fishin bate,
get upon the vibe,
put upon the dub plate.

And this one


In the chatroom on the internet
I broke out in sweat from a girl I met
I asked her out she said alright mate
name a time and a place and we will arrange date
friday at eight she said great
dress to impress and don't be late
friday at eight she came she wern't on the bus
she wern't on the train
I thought I had been blown out once again
all you women are are all the damn same
and then suddenly up pulled a cab with a fit little bird oi oi savaloy
you'e coming with me vapour MC with da B.O.D

Chapter 3 , the 3rd bredder, from the UK Terror,
no matter whether your clever, we still be crackin' the leather,
on the whip, while your locked in the cellar,
you told me you were heavyweight, your as light as a feather,
whatever!, mate, your a **** tale teller,
if i see you i'll switch, and im not a nice fella,
your last release was anything but a seller,
and i read your Mag interview, shame its in Bella,
you smeller, your breaths not green it's yellow,
your microphone fears the word accapella,
chapter 3 keep spittin' forever, we're never ever gonna sever a letter,
thats why we're spittin' better,
im gonna run down & gun down rappers when i come down,
i aint gonna finish til the suns down,
bun down green til my lungs drown,
battle in a tongue war, win a thumb war with my thumbs down!
i got a key, im gonna lock it,
when i battle with a gun, i never drop it,
until i force you to pop it,
stop it, the lyrical miracle rap rocket,
my tongue earns cash, i dont do brock pocket,
you with the mic there, drop it,
you tried bus' a lyric but you made a real nightmare of it,
d'ya write that lyric? or did ya bite bare of it?
i'll creep into your house and ignite bare of it!!!!!

Edit: Tell me what you think :D :d

There great danny! Gl to you writing more songs, if you do, which i hope you do... blah....

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Originally Posted by Stacey.

There great danny! Gl to you writing more songs, if you do, which i hope you do... blah....

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U DIDNT REPLY TO MY LYRICS "WAAAAAAAHHHHH"

I thought those lyrics were good! It takes alot to put down what your feeling into words. Well done. And i do care about your lyrics, don't listen to the other idiots.

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Originally Posted by Victimized

I thought those lyrics were good! It takes alot to put down what your feeling into words. Well done. And i do care about your lyrics, don't listen to the other idiots.

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Nicely put lol ty anyways +rep

GREAT JAMIE!

I like them and thankyou everyone else for their comments they mean alot to me thanks to you all !


Danny.

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Originally Posted by danny1541

GREAT JAMIE!

I like them and thankyou everyone else for their comments they mean alot to me thanks to you all !


Danny.

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Yup ty +rep for saying it woz GREAT :D

WOW there kool dude! u recken u could make me some? i will give u a lil story
well i went out with this las chloe then we split up for another lad then we went out agen and it felt real spceacil then i went to turkey really missed her looked for a internet place all over went on msn and she said it was over cos she has chnaged and today i found out that she dumped me for another lad agen we are still mates but i dunno but thats it could you right a song about that? i will give u furni and rep

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Originally Posted by TealArms

WOW there kool dude! u recken u could make me some? i will give u a lil story
well i went out with this las chloe then we split up for another lad then we went out agen and it felt real spceacil then i went to turkey really missed her looked for a internet place all over went on msn and she said it was over cos she has chnaged and today i found out that she dumped me for another lad agen we are still mates but i dunno but thats it could you right a song about that? i will give u furni and rep

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1 bit i dno wot ya on bout dis bit :

well i went out with this las chloe then we split up for another lad
lol tht sound akward no offence split up for another lag lol im jking i no wot ya mean

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Originally Posted by jamiefellows17

1 bit i dno wot ya on bout dis bit :

well i went out with this las chloe then we split up for another lad
lol tht sound akward no offence split up for another lag lol im jking i no wot ya mean

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Lol i ment she split up for another lad like could u also try and make it like bljnk and green day songs not like rap

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Originally Posted by Punk Rock Star

Hey you, shut up, people do care, and you should just go away cuz nobody wants you here

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Oh sorry you poser.

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