telephrase room x

yes xx hope u like it
http://i.imgur.com/By1RKeT.png

Looks same old, nothing new :(

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Originally Posted by oli

Looks same old, nothing new :(

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hu?? this is my first time making a haunted themed room so idno wot ur on xx

would be better if you hid all the wired

and that blue gate thingy looks out of place :3


but v.nice

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Originally Posted by :Cerys

would be better if you hid all the wired

and that blue gate thingy looks out of place :3


but v.nice

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i need that 1 wired to change the theme lol, i dont wanna keep scrolling up the room to find it and change it, and thanks x, gates to teleport me to host area

Don't like it.

Just looks pretty basic and not very well thought out, I don't know what you've put behind the moon but I'm not too fond of that either. 10/10 for effort, though.

A bit small for me, but I like the moon thing :P

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Originally Posted by 650c

Don't like it.

Just looks pretty basic and not very well thought out, I don't know what you've put behind the moon but I'm not too fond of that either. 10/10 for effort, though.

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thanks, and can u explain how it isnt thought out, like explain why u dont like it so i can improve ty

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Originally Posted by Police

A bit small for me, but I like the moon thing :P

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ty x

Don't really like it either...

- The Ghost box's look odd, would be better if you hid them in furniture so they cant be seen.

- Like others have said the wired does not fit in the room, would be stacked better in furniture and I'm sure you could just use the command :furni when changing as thats hardly any effort :)

- Also like someone else mentioned the group gate ruins room, even if its for teleporting hosts over it's still ugly. I think you a wired teleport would be much better and give your hosts the keyword.

- Also the blue floor switch looks completely odd for the theme of the room, surely you could change that to a brown one.

2/10.

wow since when did people become so harsh

i love it and i think it works really well together with the halloween theme, i love small rooms

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Originally Posted by Jurv

wow since when did people become so harsh

i love it and i think it works really well together with the halloween theme, i love small rooms

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ikr :(((( thank u loads xoxo

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Don't really like it either...

- The Ghost box's look odd, would be better if you hid them in furniture so they cant be seen.

- Like others have said the wired does not fit in the room, would be stacked better in furniture and I'm sure you could just use the command :furni when changing as thats hardly any effort :)

- Also like someone else mentioned the group gate ruins room, even if its for teleporting hosts over it's still ugly. I think you a wired teleport would be much better and give your hosts the keyword.

- Also the blue floor switch looks completely odd for the theme of the room, surely you could change that to a brown one.

2/10.

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2/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( it cant be that **** can it ok im changing the gate, and ill try to find other switch, and hide the wired, will that get me the 8 points then lol

only bit i like is the bit where people wait

i'm not so keen on the room layout but i think it's pretty cute. not keen on the wired and the group gate showing though. :P you could maybe place the wired in the queue bit or just somewhere else, so you can see it a little but it's hidden slightly? halloween rooms are my fav tho so this is quite nice

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Originally Posted by McDonalds

i'm not so keen on the room layout but i think it's pretty cute. not keen on the wired and the group gate showing though. :P you could maybe place the wired in the queue bit or just somewhere else, so you can see it a little but it's hidden slightly? halloween rooms are my fav tho so this is quite nice

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thanks xo ive gotten rid of the gate and wired now :
http://i.imgur.com/NOMJSCo.png

awww that's much better. the switch looks good, the gate being removed makes the room theme seem better and the removal of the wired was a good move haha

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Originally Posted by McDonalds

awww that's much better. the switch looks good, the gate being removed makes the room theme seem better and the removal of the wired was a good move haha

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xoxoxoxoxo

nice theme ^.^

Wow really harsh comments, I agree. The room is a bit too small for my taste but it's simple and cute. I understand it's much easier to have the wired where you can see it and since it's a telephrase room people understand it too.

Good job!