A Poem I Wront ^^ Rate Pleaseee

[Hannaa]

Tears of blood

Tears of blood
A heart of stone,
Lost and cold and all alone,
Silent yet you scream in pain,
When darkness falls on you again.

I watch and see what you've become,
The twisting path down which you've gone,
And knowing you wer'ent meant to be
The souless monster that I see
Hurts more then the foul deeds you've done.

I know that once you laughed and smiled.
I know that once you cared,
I know that this was meant to be-
But no-one was prepared.

I didn't know it hurt so much
To lose you in this way,
I didn't know the pain gets worse, every single day.

You sit there,
Far away from me,
And yet so very close,
As silent and unsmiling as a spirit or a ghost.
And as I look at you, I think,
You never would have thought,
That such a gentle person could make me so distraught.

But no longer are you gentle, or caring, or kind,
Even when I strain my eyes, I see no beauty inside.
You've lost yourself in hatred, you never will come out,
You've forgotten all the things that we used to talk about.

And it's wrong of me to give up hope,
It's wrong of me to cry,
But I know that even though you're living,
Inside you'll start to die.

But you go on sitting there,
Wrapped in smoke and choking fumes,
You know but you don't care
That this despair consumes.

And if you go on as you are,
If you don't look for the light,
Then lost and gone forever
Will be everything that's bright.

RATE PLEASEEE

[Hannaa]

I spelt the title thing wrong **Wrote

[Lissie152]

Awww thats lovely hun x x Very creative..and nicely written

[Hannaa]

Awww thats lovely hun x x Very creative..and nicely written

^^ Thanks.

[t0tsy]

That's.. like pretty good. I mean I try to write and I just sux..

well done looks like you have talent =]

[Hannaa]

I'm not THAT good at writing poemsssss.
I think the one I posted was pretty... bad!

[t0tsy]

I'm not THAT good at writing poemsssss.
I think the one I posted was pretty... bad!

I thought it was ok...

[SHEEPY]

Why do you have to write sad poems? what's wrong with picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies?

[Hannaa]

I thought it was ok...

*Shrugs*

[t0tsy]

picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies?

Awwwwww