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  1. #1
    Embean Guest

    Default Watch your back.

    The girl stepped inside her house, closing the door to slowly, biting her lip hoping it wouldn’t make a noise. She crept upstairs, and shut her door just as slowly as before. She was safe, now she just had to make sure she didn’t need to come out of her bedroom till morning. The reason was, her father beat her mother up, if she didn’t do what he said, he’d kill her, and her mother too. She breathed a sigh of relief and sat on her bed. The next day after school, she closed the door, but the door banged shut, and out came her father, with him tugging on his wife’s jacket.
    ‘I thought I told you to be quiet!’ He yelled at her.
    ‘I, I, didn’t mean to, it’s the wind..’ she couldn’t even finish her sentence. Her father slapped her round her face, leaving a sore red mark on her face. She scrambled to the door, hoping to get out of the mad house. The man grabbed hold of his daughters hair, and punched her hard in the face, ‘DON’T YOU DARE!’
    ‘Get off her!’ his wife cried. He turned to her, dragging her into the kitchen, he walked over the the kitchen units, opening up a draw. He had a grin on his face, as he pulled out a sharp edged kitchen knife. ‘I warned you, and now you’ve broken my rules. I told you, you’d pay!’ He raised his arm with the weapon in his hand, and brought it down into her neck. The woman shrieked, falling onto the floor. The girl came running in, with tears running down her eyes. ‘LOOK WHAT YOU’VE DONE!’ she said crying.
    The father looked at her with sweat pouring out of his forehead, ‘and now you’re next’ he said, grinning.
    She looked at him, plainly, while running upstairs and forcing her door to a close. Just before she could click it to, he forced it back open. Still, he had the knife in his hand. The girl cowered away onto her bed, as he raised his knife one last time, and slowly shot it down into her flesh.
    Now still remains her rotting body on her bed, her clothes are full of dark red blood, and nobody knows what happened to her father.
    Some says he shot himself, but some say he’s still out there..
    So I’d be watching your back.

    The end.
    Pleaseee comment =D x
    Last edited by Embean; 08-02-2006 at 08:27 PM.

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    Amazoning. 10/10.

  3. #3
    Embean Guest

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    Quote Originally Posted by Addie.
    Amazoning. 10/10.
    yayaya

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    brill, I it, last line is scary, 10/10 +rep
    On three,
    we're jumping from this ledge,
    this build's tall,
    I'm sure we'll wake up dead

    But I still love her..

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    Lmao, this sounds like a true story. Is it? But it's totally awesome anyway. 10/10.

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    bluddy disturbing if you ask me! lol.
    Nar.

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    Its ritten good, but a bit disturbin ye


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