'AoJ' Studios (MUST SEE)

[kobi626]

Hello.

As I think the thread was removed.. I'll re post it

Anyway This alt, In my opinion so far is my best alt. It took me over 4 hours to make it. No lies. I worked on it tons of time.

If you cannot understand, This days i'm making a flash show called 'AOJ' (Adventures of Jessica) which is placed at www.the-bec.net

The alt contain few rooms:
-: Main room above
-: Make up, Costumes and decorations room (Cptn.kewl - the show's pixel artist placed there, and one of the shows characters)
-: Tech & Control room ( LuckyRare - BEC's owner & Jackolusss - BEC owner aswell and the show's animator placed there)
-: Filming area (Me - Show's director placed there and one of the shows characters)

Anyway, Few mentions about the alt:
The red dragon, Crystal ball, Skeleton costume & Candle habbo was made by Cptn.kewl which is my show's pixel artist.
Also
The ghost costume was made by Roboevil which let me use it for my show.

PLEASE do not be harsh. Rate out of /10. Be nice.

[Mxrt]

OMG that is BRILLIANT. There are a few pixel errors, but only 2. Basically, all I'm saying is

ELITES.

[brodeo]

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

[Mxrt]

No I am not blind but I can see you are!!!

[kobi626]

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

I so like people that aren't reading everything, and then blame you on nothing :rolleyes: .. As I said ALLREADY I thought and still think that my post been removed cus the forums backups and that's why I reposted the thread.

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks

[Mr.Sam]

i think a bit more care could be taken;

for example the shadows are the wrong shame and many are the wrong shape.
some items such as the bush's on the top floor and the stickers on the left room could be improved.

7/10 | Good effort

[IAtePants]

Nice Im Liking It Parts I Like Most

The Hair Mop Great Idea
The Mirror
And The Costume Hanger

Bad Parts

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

I Give It 7/10 Great Try

P.s. Loving The Show

[ItsDave]

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

[brodeo]

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks

Should have gone to specsavers. Let's read some of the other comments in this thread.

i think a bit more care could be taken;

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

Please shout at these people before directing it completely towards me. Now, for your errors, i thoight i'd point out a view seeing as you seem to be completely oblivious to the fact this alteration should not have been reposted.


Lets explain further:
1. Grey/green line in the floor, shows no effort whatsoever in floor shading.
2. That icky ball thing. What is it? Why is it so poorly shaded? And why does the shading go light/dark/light when it should be getting darker.
3. Who has ever heard of a blue shadow please raise your hand.
4. The stand has some pixel errors in as well as black lines which are not needed, somebody got black line happy in this alteration.
5. A copy and paste mark, it looks like this alteration has been cut out and pasted into the main 'masterpiece' and then poorly coloured in after.


Lets explain a little further:
1. The divide has pixel errors again.
2. What in gods name created this desk? Either somebody got it off a scrap heap or lost their instructions for a flat pack ikea shelf.
3. Who spilled white paint on the desk? I just don't get why there is a white square there. In fact it can't even be paint because it's so square.
4. Everything is black, no shading and to top it off it's outlined in GREY.
5. That amazing floor again. Next time you print screen a habbo room put in the effort of colouring in ALL of floor? And maybe so the colour do not clash as bad.

And as for the me being terribly jealous of your alteration please take that thought out of your head immediatly. Hey, maybe you can check out and comment on one of my recent alterations sometime:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148150 - Furni Xposed
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148283 - Recliner
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147966 - Coaster Pieces
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147914 - Tea Light

Hey i'm not amazing at alterations, i'm not special at all but at least i don't inflate my own head so much it won't fit out of the door. How do you fit so much self excellence in your post.

[Arth]

Great effort 7.5/10