Hahah My First Ever Silly Story Poem Type Thingy x]

[Jasmin]

HeHee Its Funny I remember Writing it, It was a Summer and My Brother was Jumping on My bed breaking the springs lmao anyway enough of that !

Funky Red Riding Hood-

Little Red riding Hood Loved her hair
Soft and shiny everyone would stare.
She went to her grans one sunny day,
but trouble struck on the way.

a Female wold was jelous of her hair,
she'd ruin it without a care!
so she ran to grandmas, Quick as Quick
Poor old Granny was terribly sick.

She held Granny down and with a Claw,
cut all grannys hair as it fell on the floor.
poor old granny how she cried,
the wolf felt sorry for her and sighed.

Im sorry She said but your grand-daughter Shall pay,
and Granny said you keep away.
Oh sed the wolf what are you going to do ?
abd she untied the granny for she needed the loo [toilet]

Secretly Granny got a hairdryer
and pounced on the wolf and the wolf yelled LIAR !
ahh sed the granny i did so,
a Few Minz Later the Wold had a Funky Afro !

By Now Red Riding Hood walked though the door,
She screamed at seeing grannys hair on the floor
She stared at The wolf and her Funky Hair do.
Granny Kiked The wolf Out, way out of the door.
and they all lived happily ever after............
Once More

That was written by Me and im Not Lying

[:kader]

I only read the first stanza but it was still good! Bravo!

[Painiac]

lol i laughed at that... brilliant.... i think it is fab

[Jasmin]

Thanks

[Adzeh]

very good. i like it, especialy the though of a granny with an afro.

[davy880]

BRAVO! BRAVO ! a very nice ending if i say so myself i love a happy ending : D: D: D

[Julia7]

Lol welldone that was gr8 *claps*

[Ziabotsu]

LOL! Though that isnt the original sorty of little red riding hood :p

[Szam]

Cool, nice Poem