Alien Drawing for website needs improving...

[Recursion]

for a simple 'Alien' type of Website thing what do you think i could improve on for this:?



The BG will not be grey when i have finished it so the outline will be easier on the eyes. Either that or it just doesnt go with the blue lol.
As i said it was simple and a 5 Minute job but it doesnt look right to me. I need to improve it but i dont know where. This is the one i wanted moving eyes on.

I know this may be copying ThyBag a bit but it is going to be used for a completely different site which will not be a tutorial site.

[Jargit]

make it green ( and add those things on their head

[Per]

Done in flash i guesse, i recommend for non-moving cartoon (picture) characters
using cs2. But if you dont have it i guesse you could add shading and some more
Detail? maybe a better shape, it looks odd to me.

[Recursion]

it looks odd to me. I do have photoshop but i dont want to do it in PSCS2 because im learning how to use it properley. I also like this done in Flash 8 becuase it has stuff in it that i will use later on.

Ill see what it is like in green and then maby add those little antenna things (i think thats what you meant Fusion). I dont want detail and shading. If you look at ThyBags it doesnt have shading (the banner does but the ones next to the news doesnt)

[Josh-H]

I agree, with fusion and maybe add some more detail...

[Per]

Thybags?

[Recursion]

www.thybag.co.uk

This any better?? I only changed the color to green:

[SimplyTech]

im sorry but you cant compare that to thybags thier one has minor shading if you look closely and theirs just looks good

[Recursion]

i am trying to keep it simple and that was a 5 min job. I am new to flash and photoshop. I am doing this in Flash and as the title says it needs improving "/

[SimplyTech]

yeh and all was doing was telling you it needs shading