Arcade Machine +Scratch+

[Luayminator]

This is an arcade machine I made, please remember im no super alts artist, rare out of ten+ rep if you think I deserve it. Also say if im improving or not please.

[Racoon]

wow thats really good i think! what did u do it on? like ht epicture! 10/10 plus rep!

[Luayminator]

Well .. I did make it on paint Lol

[Cheeseboy76]

ooooo me like but luay yet agen deres no shadow :@ u need 2 make shadows 4 ur fings so den dere betta :@ so far 8/10 if it ad shadow :@ its b a 10/10 but its got no shadow so its not :@

[Luayminator]

Im afraid im too dumb in pixel alt to make shadows at the moment :S
Ill figure it out soon

[Xero]

Wow.. could use a bit of advanced shading... (eg. for something easy... just a bit of shine on the metal/plastic). lighter then the normal colour on the forwards edges too, and more detail, atm, this ****s.

[Anderman]

You defiantly improving
As xero sed its needs more shading,
And some more detail on the controls and on the screen.
Also the s at the top needs to be done in isometrix text, Not just 'painted'
7/10 At the mo

[x!-=cherry=-!x]

looks good u should have dont the floor up so it more eye cathcing but its great nevermind the floor 10/10

[Zantetsu]

Aww thats really cool! Youve got to think about shading on the sides of objects, to make it look better 7/10 good job

[PandaPlanet]

Wow.. could use a bit of advanced shading... (eg. for something easy... just a bit of shine on the metal/plastic). lighter then the normal colour on the forwards edges too, and more detail, atm, this ****s.

Woo, Xero's back and right on track.
Can't more agree, no highlighting, no shading, not having a shadow is a tiny details. But reallyshading and highlighting are the basics of PA.
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Edited by Soyers (Forum Moderator): Partial post removed, please dont be rude.