First [proper] alts

[Mado]

Attached are my first proper alts

Rate /10 and c+c please

They are: Lodge Screen and an Umbrella

[Jazza]

6/10 Sorry, They are facing the direction, imagine them in a room, they would be slanted sideways and neither of them are really very Habbo-ish. Good to see some new people trying though.

[Hopeless]

The umbrella isn't very good im sorry. 4/10


But the lodge gate. I like it. Its amazing. 8/10

Average - 6/10

[Mado]

But the lodge gate. I like it. Its amazing. 8/10

Wow - An amazing on my first alt!

[Browney]

Ok well...

The Lodge Screen:
- Needs to be isometric. This means the line is at the ratio of 2:1.
Eg.
- Has to many black lines. Habbo always has a black outline on furniture but not many in it. Instead it uses brighter colours to show a corner.
- Blend the shading a bit more.

5/10

Umbrella:
- Too small for Habbo.
- Shaky lines.
- Not much shading.

4/10

[Porosity]

The lodge thing looks OK to me, 6/10

4/10 for umbrella

[hit-by-a-car]

erm sorry they arnt very good, they get a 5 / 10 for effort, you have to make the umbrella bigger for a start.

[matt1234]

erm its allrite 4 first alt on lodge thing but the other 1 has shaky lines

[Mado]

the umbrella was rushed but the lodge screen took a bit of time. Thanks for the advice ill bear it in mind

[GommeInc]

I like the umbrella? It's got everything it needs in my opinion, shading, rain drops etc. You just need to work on its form.