bowlin on habbo version 1

[Lmao]

ill make version 2 tomoz mornin once i seen the c&c and ill post it in this thread
i wanna improve this alt, it took a while but didnt come out how i wnted it to

[Caution]

Lol @ the bowl on the alley

[brandon]

7/10, not your best

[Black_Parade]

4/10, add black lines and more shading, and it might actually be good...

[Bryan84]

4/10, add black lines and more shading, and it might actually be good...

The ball like pancakes. Keke!

[Smile]

3/10

its not lined up the the squares properly..

[Becci]

Make the balls rounder. The writing isnt very good Im sorry to say try writing it neater. the alley way is kinda wonkey and the brown is going into the black and looks messey.
For effort 6/10

[Goofy]

it's not isometric, the bowling balls look flat, there's NO shading, you used default colours, the writing os horrible and the things you're supposed to know down look like (non isometric) bottles..

I'm sorry, but this is nothing more worth then a 1/10...

PS. i thought you said that you got some kind of book, about making alts, for christmas? Well... USE it :rolleyes:

[piddle2k6]

Not being harsh but even the writing is bad....Dont use paint becasue it looks like you are... itt just looks like you have drawn on the floor theres no shape

1/10

[scubadiva]

If you want to improve on the writing, say STRIKE! or something on the hotel, take a screenshot, paste it onto paint, and take out the word strike. Then press Ctrl+W, when you still have the word STRIKE! selected, and in the bottom box where it says Vertical, type in -27 and click OK. Then you should have some neat text which is isometric