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  1. #1
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    Default The poem of you all of you read here rate outta 10 kk woooo its good ur involved

    Are you nice
    are you sneaky like a little mice
    are you tough
    and do you play rough
    are you sweet
    and like to eat wheat
    well get out of you chair
    and dont fiddle with your hair
    take a run around the park
    and then you can push them on bark
    if you called a scardey cat
    give them a smack
    cause im about to tell you about little jack
    he was a little wimp
    didnt show his true toughness
    someone said your weak
    but then wack around the cheek
    so then he said come on then
    and the other guy ran off like a hen
    but years go past
    and then he watch the mask
    he acted like him jack
    but then got hit
    jack was to nasty a little bit
    people may be weaker
    but the person has a big beaker
    so shut your mouth
    they could turn around and hit you
    as jack gave it all the mouth
    and he got hit
    but remember dont fight people who r big and small
    they will hit you and then youll fall
    dont judge people
    they will get you back
    they will go mental and hit you with a tennis wrack
    BE CAREFUL.

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    I don't like it, poems are actually suppose to make sense :|
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    I didn't like it either. It seems that at some points you are just putting in random words to make your poem rhyme. 2 out of 10.
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    I dont like it at all.
    First of all, poems dont always have to rhyme you know, your just putting in words to try and make it rhyme

    Second, poems are supposed to make sense, yours doesnt.
    Im not even going to give it a rating out of 10, it doesnt deserve one.
    Dirge Of Cerberus


    From here, a hunt is taking place over the entire world.
    For the worthless prey, massacre and atrocities are planned...

    It's the beginning of the end...


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    Bored.... frustrated.... confused..... hated it..... 0.1/10
    An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind!

    To say you are part of the majority makes you one of the minority.


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