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  1. #1

    Default Mine

    I cannot help it
    Don't question the abilities
    The rose will turn black at the sight of your blood
    The stench
    The stench
    You cannot
    escape
    You cannot
    run
    There will always be someone ready
    Ready to stop you from the final destination
    Forget about aspirations
    DEATH
    SUICIDE
    BLOOD
    HABBO, YOU ARE MY BIACH LOVER><
    I WOULD DIE IN A HOLE DUG WITH MY OWN SWEAT AND FURY FOR YOU
    DONT JUDGE OTHERS. IT'LL ONLY COME BACK AND BITE YOU
    STAB

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    Default Yno..

    Hmm.
    Yno
    That wasnt actually TOO bad.
    I like the last 2 lines

    Ur signature tho? ..
    ;l
    Last edited by .Suzu.; 29-03-2007 at 11:21 AM.
    NEW ACCOUNT - DAPHNE,


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    lol ilu
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    its not bad..

    Its ok average

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    ive seen this guy (the thread starter) around in quite a few threads.,
    He makes me lol so much
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    Well it looks like you didn't put too much effort into this poem, and i'm struggling to fully understand the full meaning of it. I guess it's about someone trying to stop someone from acheiving something or reaching somewhere? It's a rather basic poem, although it's relatively good you could of expressed more of a meaning through the poem and made it longer, but still it's not bad!

    5/10

    To Improve
    • Fully express the meaning of the poem through the lines in which you write
    • Spend more time thinking about what to write, use of similies and metaphors etc
    • Generally make the poem a little longer and maybe use punctuation more
    "Practice makes perfect but no-ones perfect, so why practice?"
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ahhlex View Post
    Well it looks like you didn't put too much effort into this poem, and i'm struggling to fully understand the full meaning of it. I guess it's about someone trying to stop someone from acheiving something or reaching somewhere? It's a rather basic poem, although it's relatively good you could of expressed more of a meaning through the poem and made it longer, but still it's not bad!

    5/10

    To Improve
    • Fully express the meaning of the poem through the lines in which you write
    • Spend more time thinking about what to write, use of similies and metaphors etc
    • Generally make the poem a little longer and maybe use punctuation more
    AHAHAHAHAHAH
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    Quote Originally Posted by FlyingJesus View Post
    AHAHAHAHAHAH
    wa????
    "Practice makes perfect but no-ones perfect, so why practice?"
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    Wait just realised you're new... sorry but this poem was made as a joke lol. After a while you learn to work out who's a real poster and who's a troll ^^
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