I'll be watching over. - Very sad, be warned.

[KevSays]

Jason had it all. A life no-one would reject. He was 32, big house, nice car, loving wife and doting children. But, as well as all these luxuries, Jason had a secret, a secret that he wanted no-one to know about.

Now Jason, was a striking man, he was tall, handsome and malovent blue eyes.
He was outgoing, and always the centre of attention. He was one of the lads.

But one night, as he was getting into his car, he didn't feel right, far from normal. He shivered. As he drove his car down to the local pub, where he agreed to meet some of his co-workers, he saw a faint light in the pine trees, squinting he tried to make out what it was. Forgetting about the pub he drove onwards towards the light in the distance.

As he got closer, he could make out the lining of what seemed to be a big shed. With the light still shining, Jason stopped his car, and began to walk cautiously along the asphalt. He knocked on the door. No answer. He knocked again. No answer. With a heave, he kicked the door down. And a figure quickly sat bolt upright. Jason's face filled with fear and shock.

Ok, you may hate me eternally here, but Im really tired and I gotta go.
So, I'll carry it on tomorrow. Any good so far though guys?

[clearmint]

OMG!!! PLEASE FINISH!!! I WILL REP U LOADS IF U DO IT IS FAB!!!!!!!!
YOU CANNOT STOP THERE IT WILL BE TORTURE!

[ChloeDust]

Gah, cliff-hangers man i hate cliff-hangers rofl Plz finish it >.< Lol sound fab so far though x

[Surname]

Good so far, I look forward to reading the rest.

[Painiac]

Very nice so far.... must continue... or be guilty of making me cry

[leachy141]

i dont like its to gud

[Janumz]

You said you'd carry on yesterday, so do the restttt

It's great, I love it =]