Halloween Room / Character.

[Black_Parade]

I know halloweens gone but we can still celebrate it :p ( I think ) Here it is.



C&C And /10 please.

[PigsNose]

Well you haven't really done much.. you have made some sweet shapes on the nordic and the costume is easy to make. Put a red splodge on, make the pupils white, turn the skin colour green and make the left arm a bone shape. Fairly easy and I don't think there are any shadow's under the pumpkin and nordic.
4/10 - sorry.

[Minix]

Hmm... Yes, Shadow. I see that there's really only two alterations on the page, one being the sweets, which, to be honest, don't look very good at all... They have no texture or shading, are all the same colour, and are all in the same position... and there are a lot of pixel errors. And shadows NEED to be done.

Is this an entry for YP2? If so, there's a little you could just quickly go over before you hand it in

Example: There's no rip in the shirt, but there's still bloody flesh? It looks more like a motif like that. Put black lines, or darker blood lines around it, and maybe show off a tiny bit of green skin around the wound.

Andy

[Black_Parade]

Thanks for comments.

[ArtPopsicle]

Kind of off topic: I agree with them to.
On topic: The shading is pretty bad, (just like the others said) but, the guy is really strange. Well.. he's just with a white eyes, red blood, w.e and you didn't outline it.
I'm sorry.

[Untouchable]

Sweet shapes aren't that good.. 4/10

[Black_Parade]

I aggree its bad