Okay, basically the one I posted yesterday. I have changed some things, and put examples of what can go there there
Also, do you think it would sell? If not, I will release free anyway
Rate 'n' slate please

all you've done is added text?
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=457218
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Few things you need to get down. Needs a good background. Change the text. Get rid of them title headers. Underline the "Content" box. Or try your hands at a more modern layout
Good for a first try tho
Ok. First, the navigation texts looks rubbish. Delete the title of the site..
Anyways, it's a good start for making better layouts
6/10
Get rid of the copyright.
For a first layout its good, WD![]()
Use 9pixel vb or v.
Volter font, which you already used (www.dafont.com)
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