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    Default Jedi Master Alts [NEW]

    Hello. I'm new here. I'm from the Australian version of habbo, and I have been doing star wars role play for a few years. Anyway, I decided to make some alts one day, and I've eventually obtained this skill. (Im not posting my old ones, they're embarrising.)

    Anyway, first one is of my Jedi Character
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    And then my friend wanted to make him one, so here it is


    Please, let me know if you have ideas on how to improve.

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    Dude... what thing did you use to make that glow? It's so flawed.

    Also... god the pillow shading... it burns...

    The light should come from the saber as a source, but you've got 3 or 4 light sources.
    Don't shade using the lines as a base.
    Last edited by Boonzeet; 18-05-2008 at 09:35 AM.

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    they're all right, y'know
    "There are only two important days in your life: the day you are born, and the day you find out why."
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    Nice alts.


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    They're quite good but as Boonzeet said, the sabre is a bit iffy :rolleyes:
    "I'd rather bleed with cuts of love then live without any scars."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Boonzeet View Post
    Dude... what thing did you use to make that glow? It's so flawed.

    Also... god the pillow shading... it burns...

    The light should come from the saber as a source, but you've got 3 or 4 light sources.
    Don't shade using the lines as a base.
    That honestly makes no sense about the saber light sources..?

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    It's called a lightsaber because it gives off light.



    Look at his coat, and his face. The light comes from the saber.

    In your peice, you had a pretty crappy saber light effect with no light touching the peice from the saber. You had shading on the hair and head had light coming from above him, the coat arms had shading where the light seemed to be facing him, and the tunic had light seeming from coming from the Agreed Light Source (top left).
    Last edited by Boonzeet; 19-05-2008 at 04:04 PM.

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    The people are not too bad (never use pillow shading, it completely ruins the alt) but the saber could use work, your better off drawing either, the glow around it completely free hand or no glow at all.

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    nice work, keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Boonzeet View Post
    It's called a lightsaber because it gives off light.



    Look at his coat, and his face. The light comes from the saber.

    In your peice, you had a pretty crappy saber light effect with no light touching the peice from the saber. You had shading on the hair and head had light coming from above him, the coat arms had shading where the light seemed to be facing him, and the tunic had light seeming from coming from the Agreed Light Source (top left).
    He shouldnt need to shade the light coming from the saber, seeing as the saber light fades out before it actually reaches the person. If the lightsaber was held up close to his body, as seen in the picture you posted, then the light would shine onto his body and he would need to shade using that as a light source. As it is though, I don't think he does because the light doesn't reach him. I do agree that he should have decided on one light source though.
    Last edited by hoozy.02; 19-05-2008 at 05:51 PM.

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