well, Its a start

[Jasmin]

Im trying to get myslef back into dolls Please do not moan at me about the skirt, im trying to imrpove i like her top and shoes Thanks for veiwing
Jasmin x
Base http://apitchou.free.fr/minisite02.htm

[lauralol]

Jasmin, I thought after all the criticism you got you would try something new. But this doll STILL seems to be very similar to the rest. Maybe slightly different colours this time, but still..

As someone suggested in another thread, maybe try searching for an image on google and then base your doll on that, it will give you a challenge and it will look more original.

[Crumpets.]

Jaz, try and do a different hairstyle or a pair of pants? Nice doll though..

[AngJum]

I think the shading is quite good. And I don't think you should stop dolling just cause you aren't absolutely magnificent just now! But you do need to take critism to get better I like the doll

[Alex288]

2 be honest i dont really like the dolls, but i think the habbo fashion in ur signature is gr8 so i think u shud focus more on them

[zak-x]

It looks very nice but the legs are a bit too long 10/10 tho

[AngJum]

It looks very nice but the legs are a bit too long 10/10 tho

Are long legs not a good thing? Like Stacey keibler's?

[Crying-Angel]

firstly - yes long legs are classed as attractive.... i dunno why it is but im happy coz i have really long legs lol....

secondly - youve done the top really well, different to how i would do it, but it looks better than the other ones u have done...

for the skirt, u need to remember that skirts have folds in them because they hang from the waist due to gravity and it all tries to hang straight down therefore making folds in the fabric...
firstly draw the two lines either side for the skirt, then draw separate lines inside the skirt, then at the bottom join it all up but make sure you make some of the joining lines curve in and some curve out. *see below*

once you have done that, make the outline the darkest colour in the palet, then with the second darkest make a shadow where the darkest shadows would be (ie. under the crease)

Then keep shading with the rest of the colours, making sure that the folds pounting out end up with the highlights as they are the ones which would get the light.


then you can put the patten on the skirt but make sure that you include shading on the parrten according to the shading on the skirt...

[Ev.]

OMG ADHFEA


YOUR BREAKING YOUR OWN RULEZZ [NUDISM]

Lol, I'm Jk`ing, those dolls must be hard to make, but for your original one, the legs are freakishly long for her tiny torso.

[Yayse]

i can see you're spending more time trying to improve on your folds jasmin, as you said you wanted to in a previous thread, and these folds are a great achievment but could be a little better and now danni has provided extra help, you can carry on making them work =] the hair is really good, i think thats one of your strong points and the top is done well. although as its been said before, maybe try to do a different style of doll. not just tops and mini skirts =] why not challenge yourself? 8/10