Why Baby, Why? ♥

[GoldenGrahams]

Why, Baby, Why? ♥

"*Hugs*" He typed away, as his love grew ever stronger for the girl he'd met in the Lido.

It was only an hour ago they first got talking. From how many pets one has, to if the other had any siblings, until the big 3 words were finally released from the base of his speedily beating heart..."Wanna go out?" His fingers buzzed as he pressed the return key. He was sat upon the pink chair near the pool, just anxiously waiting for an answer, as his heart sunk..."I really don't know what to say" she cried.

He was trembling, waiting upon an answer from his new true love. "Well....yeah. I guess so." This was it! The moment he'd been waiting for! The 'y' word had finally come out. He leaped out of his desk chair and was jumping for joy!

"This is the closest I have ever come to a girl in my whole entire life!" he exclaimed whilst facing his encyclopedia collection.
He removed his spectacles from his ears, as he gave them a quick wipe.
"Wanna come back to mine?" he cunningly asked his new matchmate. She replied, telling him she had to go out to meet some 'friends' in reality.

He was heartbroken. She finally got home, and back onto habbo 3 hours later, to find 10 fan rooms had been made for her by her new 'man.' She popped into his rather empty "Solitary" room to find him in the corner, sitting upon a brown plasto chair, just awaiting her presence. He jumped for joy to see her bright green curly plaits poking through the grey doorway, as he clicked upon her tanned face to see her mission...



He was certain his name wasn't Ryan, or of course that he hadn't lied about his name being Ryan... Earlier, her mission was "Looking for Love", and he believed she had found this in him.

He thought he had the right to know who Ryan was. As the question finally popped out after a 10 minute conversation, she started trembling and stuttered, "Erm..m..my..friend..yeah, my friend :eusa_shif " She told him she had just been with her 'friends', and discovered how strong their friendship was, and decided to dedicate her mission to one of them.

There was silence for another five minutres, before he voiced his theory. "It's your man in real life, isn't it? This was all a big phony relationship. I knew it. I will never get close to a girl. Not even online!"

He cried as he left his undecorated room. It was only the next day, he had national fame, as the front page of 'The Daily Express' read:

"Sad, Lonely Boy, Found Hanging From Bathroom Celing"

I'd like to thank you all for taking your time and effort to read my story. It is my first, and I hope that if you are to judge, you judge it upon that.

As you may have gathered, the two main characters remained nameless. Regardless of whether this is based upon a true story or not, I didn't want to affect anyone.

I may be writing a few more stories in the future. But if not, I hope you've enjoyed this one.

Brad xx

[BlueTails]

Nice Morden Boy x]

[kasi]

Wow, that's great for your first story.
I can't write storys to save my life rofl.

10/10 and I'd give you rep but I allready did before ;D


->>x ♥ Kassie

[Steven]

Wow that's harsh. Like he killed himself over a girl he only met that day. :s
Its touching

[ABCEasy]

sickhead gangsta

[GoldenGrahams]

Hmm, in a way, I'm trying to describe him as a nerdy boy who had never had any sort of relationship with a girl in real life, and would love the experience, so he started on habbo. But after finding he couldn't even build up a strong relationship on the internet, he'd never have a chance at the tough life ahead of him.

xx

[Steph-ie]

It's really touching.. you are a true writer at heart.. you have a way with words.. I eagerly await a next story.

[Rachi]

Thats really Good

[GoldenGrahams]

;o

I'm very surprised, and also very appreciative of this great feedback! I'm pleased to know there is something I can do for the entertainment of others. Despite the fact it's not my greatest talent, I may well continue writing. Expect a few more soon! ;]

[Krypsis]

Brad thats actually excellent, well done mate 10/10