Dusty lounge bar.

[Domster08]

hope you like.
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plz only write constructive critisisem and not stuff like thats crap , rubish, i could do better etc.

[lPinoy]

I don't like the colours sorry. Its too bright and the light blue below looks terrible and scribbled. You've completely coloured over the outline and added random colours to the bar.

Next time, try colours which which are not too bright, and look for your own. Shade in your image next time. For example, look for lighter blue and a dark blue. If your finding it hard to colour without colouring over the outline, zoom in and colour in block of pixels by pixels. Don't use colours which contrast. Try one colour first, one you would normally find in a bar and use it, and vary in your shadings.

Hope this helped, good luck.

[e5]

Really bad choice of colours, perhaps consider using darker colours.

[j0rd]

Wrong colours :S

To light

the red looks way tobright

[Ordinate]

looka a bit odd, needs some work

nice try

[Japan]

Try and use colours that don't clash so much next time

[The Cullens]

The colours are too bright, try darker colours. A few pixel errors.

[kuzkasate]

Okay but the colours are too much random... if you get me. Maybe try focusing on 2/3 colours?