Beginner :]

[toffeetongue]

Yaha, im a beginner and im learning and looking at all your graphics for inspiration and help x]

Please don't slate too much, I am a beginner x]

"ZombieLee"


"Jilted"


Do they go here? If not, please tell me where to move them x]

[Fabienne]

Umm, Good try for a beginner. I like them, but there are a few errors..

There needs to be alot of shading in some areas, like the skirt and the blood.
And also, the stairs arent at the right angle.

[RandomManJay]

I agree with Fabienne, the blood does look a little off, you've only included an outline of the puddle and not the blood thats pouring out of the habbo. And the stairs aren't to habbo isometrics, I've included an example of what the stairs should look like (haven't transparented the background cause I couldn't be arsed :rolleyes:. Oh and save as .png, its keeps the alt clean and professional and means you can easily go back and edit/correct them afterwards.

Umm, Good try for a beginner. I like them, but there are a few errors..

There needs to be alot of shading in some areas, like the skirt and the blood.
And also, the stairs arent at the right angle.