Could have put in the same thread but I didn't want to
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I think it's much better then the one before (the one on the right) and the left image is obviously a reference.
Closed by Orangeesh (Forum Moderator): Thread closed due to being bumped.

Could have put in the same thread but I didn't want to
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I think it's much better then the one before (the one on the right) and the left image is obviously a reference.
Closed by Orangeesh (Forum Moderator): Thread closed due to being bumped.
Last edited by Orangeesh; 06-04-2010 at 01:18 AM.
slight improvment:
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Its okay
Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please always try to post constructively.
Last edited by Tash.; 18-02-2010 at 11:52 AM.
Jordan
You're all very helpful
Anyway I think this removes the hunchback look:
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Her more visible shoulder is too far away from her head, hence giving her the hunchback look and her mouth is hardly visible.
It's nice, I think the mouth could be slightly improved though..
Good work though!
God said, let there be light.
Wheresw the mouth? You can hardly make it out.
The shoulders are too big as well. Other than that its not too shabby. Nice work with the dress, keep it up +rep.
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