large lava lamps

[mattaxten]

Hello this is my first modifction i hope you like it and please comment on how i can improve it :3

[dbgtz]

the guys faing away on the left are missing a chunch of hair and some more errors around them. The front 2 guys should be behind the pule and tbh you can quite easily see that you c+ped it upwards. That wouldn't be a problem if the object was opaque but this is translucent and you can see where the floorboards are in the lamp and how they do not link. For your first though it's not bad and if you had seen my first in that other thread, you can know what I mean.

Try an opaque furniture like a basic sofa or something.

[Dinosaurawrr]

he has pretty much said everything i need to say
try with a sofa or something but your learning so well done

[Jessicrawrr]

Not bad at all, but you should try something opaque like mr selena gomez said that'd be an easier starter

[j0rd]

Theres quite alot of errors like on the boys head.
Theres also an error on the top of the lava

Other than them its good!