Enlargement for NOTSackRace

GER:Donay · 21-01-2013, 04:29 PM

CAN SOMEBODY MENTION NOTSackRace & EXPLAIN HOW TO MENTION PEOPLE?

**David** · 21-01-2013, 04:34 PM

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=742758
@N0TSackRace;

Samantha · 21-01-2013, 04:35 PM

Originally Posted by David

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=742758
@N0TSackRace;

It's a zero not an O, @N0TSackRace;

It's not bad, love the detail on the shirt and all of it really. Not too fond of the glasses though

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**David** · 21-01-2013, 04:36 PM

Originally Posted by Samanfa

It's a zero not an O, @N0TSackRace;

It's not bad, love the detail on the shirt and all of it really. Not too fond of the glasses though

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2 quick for u sorry ;l

hi give it red hair

GER:Donay · 21-01-2013, 05:49 PM

notsackrace asked me to do that and its an black-haired habbo

++ thanks to u all

**dbgtz** · 21-01-2013, 06:20 PM

One thing that I would say is that there are loads of unused colours which are unnecessary as you can barely see them. It also seems in some places you are just placing random lines without actually thinking about it in an attempt to add detail, but to me it just looks quite sloppy & I'd advise to be more precise as it's something I used to do and being more precise just improves the end result dramatically. One more thing regarding shading is that the flower shirt seems more shaded as if they were objects themselves, not a shirt (though the actual design may be like that, I don't know for sure). Finally, you should probably work on the hair's line art, it's all circular and weird when it should be spikey and adding lines which mimic hair can make it appear more fleshed out.